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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2003-08-04 04:35 AM


Touching

When I touch you
I like what I touch.
If it's alright with you
I'm going to keep on
touching you until I
touch your heart
and your soul.

We'll share days of
wine and roses,
we'll know splendor
in the grass,
we'll stay together
until the end of never,
that's how long
love can last.

JamesLee
August04
2003

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-08-04 04:58 AM


nice concept, or should I say dream


inkedgoddess
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2 posted 2003-08-05 06:44 AM


that's how long
love can last.

ditto on dixiecups

angelblueyes
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3 posted 2003-08-05 07:41 AM


You speak of love so well.I hope we all find this kind of love on our lifetimes.
angelblueyes

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2003-08-05 08:41 AM


Thank you passing shadow, inkedgoddess and angelblueyes for the nice response...
Yes, love can last a lifetime...the hard part is finding two people that want it for that length of time...James

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5 posted 2003-08-05 10:37 AM


Oh yes, the "touch" ... so very important in sharing ones feelings, a slight brush here a hand held there ... *sigh* ... ya gotta love it.

I agree love can go on forever IF two work on it.

And yes this one "touched" me. *smile*

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

SharaRose
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6 posted 2003-08-05 10:41 AM


Sweet one. Lovely thoughts.

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Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

HopeS
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7 posted 2003-08-05 11:14 AM


nicely expressed James,
togetheness to the end , is the balance
of  give and take with an even blend

Hope

cusick
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8 posted 2003-08-05 03:19 PM


James, so beautifully penned. Puts cynics to shame. Maggie
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9 posted 2003-08-05 07:03 PM


JamesMichael~
You've touched me with a huge *sigh*

Beautiful, sir~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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nakdthoughts
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10 posted 2003-08-05 07:08 PM


very nice..now if only it were true...

*s
M

JamesMichael
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11 posted 2004-09-09 12:56 PM


Thank each one of you for the nice responses...for some this is true and for some it is a desire and for some it seems very far away...yes it does take two with similar desires...James
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