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JamesMichael
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0 posted 08-04-2003 04:35 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for JamesMichael

Touching

When I touch you
I like what I touch.
If it's alright with you
I'm going to keep on
touching you until I
touch your heart
and your soul.

We'll share days of
wine and roses,
we'll know splendor
in the grass,
we'll stay together
until the end of never,
that's how long
love can last.

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2003
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1 posted 08-04-2003 04:58 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

nice concept, or should I say dream

inkedgoddess
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2 posted 08-05-2003 06:44 AM       View Profile for inkedgoddess   Email inkedgoddess   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for inkedgoddess

that's how long
love can last.

ditto on dixiecups
angelblueyes
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3 posted 08-05-2003 07:41 AM       View Profile for angelblueyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angelblueyes

You speak of love so well.I hope we all find this kind of love on our lifetimes.
angelblueyes
JamesMichael
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4 posted 08-05-2003 08:41 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Thank you passing shadow, inkedgoddess and angelblueyes for the nice response...
Yes, love can last a lifetime...the hard part is finding two people that want it for that length of time...James
Janette
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5 posted 08-05-2003 10:37 AM       View Profile for Janette   Email Janette   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janette

Oh yes, the "touch" ... so very important in sharing ones feelings, a slight brush here a hand held there ... *sigh* ... ya gotta love it.

I agree love can go on forever IF two work on it.

And yes this one "touched" me. *smile*

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

SharaRose
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6 posted 08-05-2003 10:41 AM       View Profile for SharaRose   Email SharaRose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SharaRose

Sweet one. Lovely thoughts.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

HopeS
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7 posted 08-05-2003 11:14 AM       View Profile for HopeS   Email HopeS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HopeS's Home Page   View IP for HopeS

nicely expressed James,
togetheness to the end , is the balance
of  give and take with an even blend

Hope
cusick
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8 posted 08-05-2003 03:19 PM       View Profile for cusick   Email cusick   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for cusick

James, so beautifully penned. Puts cynics to shame. Maggie
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9 posted 08-05-2003 07:03 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

JamesMichael~
You've touched me with a huge *sigh*

Beautiful, sir~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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nakdthoughts
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10 posted 08-05-2003 07:08 PM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

very nice..now if only it were true...

*s
M
JamesMichael
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11 posted 09-09-2004 12:56 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Thank each one of you for the nice responses...for some this is true and for some it is a desire and for some it seems very far away...yes it does take two with similar desires...James
 
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