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Open Poetry #28

secret of a day

lucky
Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 1601
Idaho

0 posted 2003-08-04 02:13 AM

secret of a day

the quiet whisper
of treat & pond's misty
rolling I follow her path
down grasses and
there cradled
in misty
flowing
& the
floating
spring away I
watched her softness
bathing in the secret of a day

Speaking of ghosts, wouldn't you know here comes mine again...
~Rosemary J. Gwaltney~

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

1 posted 2003-08-04 02:48 AM

Made me picture Xena... (yummy!)

-MVS

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garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-08-04 03:25 AM

This is really beautiful. I
love the form you used.

Hugs

Ethel

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-08-04 05:02 AM

awesome write...short and powerful

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2003-08-04 11:17 AM

another beauty...

M

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

5 posted 2003-08-04 11:18 AM

Another wondrous sight.
angelblueyes

lucky
Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 1601
Idaho

6 posted 2003-08-04 11:22 AM

I was actually thinking of Marge... back a year or so ago when she wrote some.....thing about running naked on the beach,,,, in secret of course. LoL

dale

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