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symphony_of_thoughts
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0 posted 2003-08-03 06:37 PM



Oh the geniuses who invented
Who invented this beautiful instrument
That can take you away, like a book
To a far off distant place
Where your inner and outer worries are displaced
Where time is no more
Where life will stop in its tracks
Pausing for all eternity

Versatile Violin
Play me your music that I adore
Filling Me
Inspiring me to do more with my life
Driving evil thoughts out of my skull
Play that song that makes my spine chill
Play that song that makes my hair rise
Play that song that takes me away
Away out of the way of my mind
Towards the back where everything is organized
And there are no worries, nor problems
The strings are god-like in nature
So simplistic as a wood chasis and metal strings
But so complex a nature in the sound

Oh the geniuses who invented
Who invented this beautiful instrument
That can take you away, like a book
To a far off distant place
Where your inner and outer worries are displaced
Where time is no more
Where life will stop in its tracks
Pausing for all eternity

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JamesMichael
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1 posted 2003-08-03 06:39 PM


Lovely...my favorite is the cello...James
Midnitesun
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2 posted 2003-08-03 08:19 PM


Play that song that makes my spine chill
Play that song that makes my hair rise
Play that song that takes me away
Away out of the way of my mind
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BRAVO! a delightful write


WELCOME! you've played a lovely tune with this piece.

SharaRose
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3 posted 2003-08-04 01:43 AM


I love violin music. My son used to play it. I do miss it alot. Such beautiful music it gives to the soul!!! Thanks for reminding of the beauty that instrument brings!!!

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Kahlil
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4 posted 2003-09-06 02:03 AM


The violin somehow strikes every chord of my emotion.  Thank you for sharing this beautiful write.  ~K~
Kethry
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5 posted 2003-09-06 02:48 AM


Brava, this works well as long as it's not me playing. When it's me 'catgut' takes on a new meaning lol.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Sunshine
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6 posted 2003-09-06 08:22 AM



I have a violin poem somewhere...
so I know the feeling you have conveyed
so well.  Thank you!

Susan Caldwell
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7 posted 2003-09-06 09:28 AM


I have always loved music (was a DJ in another life)...but have absolutely no talent what so ever...can't even carry a tune...

But oh I could sit and listen to others forever...playing anything..doesn't matter...oh now I want to go hang at a jazz bar...

Nice piece!

Susan

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8 posted 2003-09-06 02:09 PM


bumping this tune
to the top of today's chart

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