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symphony_of_thoughts
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Somewhere

0 posted 2003-08-03 04:18 PM



Positioning their mic
Everybody get ready
Take a seat, open your ears
Sound bouncing off the walls
Hitting your ears as another sip reaches your lips
Take a puff, put it down, do it again
The stale, dim lights bring half-lit, smokey faces
Fingers doing unorthodox combos
Fingers lightly bouncing from one key to another without a care
Muffled, grissley voices accompaning
Solos combining for the end
Clapping fuels the beat
Begging for another song to start



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JamesMichael
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1 posted 2003-08-03 04:32 PM


Nice title...enjoyed...James
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2 posted 2003-08-03 04:56 PM



Welcome to Passions, ST...enjoyed the poem, and looking forward to more.  Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

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Tequilia_Sunrise
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3 posted 2003-08-13 03:19 PM


I really enjoyed your poem, good work!
Welcome to passions


exhale
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4 posted 2003-08-13 03:30 PM


beautifull, i think you really captured the feeling of a jazz club jazz is truly amaizng aand when you put it like this its even better
welcome

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5 posted 2003-08-26 11:46 PM




(smiles) Yay! Yes, let's bluesy up this joint and let the saxophonist and the 12-string guitarman take center stage, here's a ring side seat of poetic perfection, yay, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your wondrous poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing!

  

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

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