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Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2003-08-03 04:08 PM



The sand beneath my feet
they fit so so neat
cool and calm like the
aftermath.

Sing songs to me like in my past
waves crushing in upon my toes
telling me one day I to shall grow
old.

Sea shells all around my eyes
takes me back into another time as
I listen close to the waves inside
makes me realize that I don't have
all the time.

The moon shines bright upon the darkest
night the stars glows near my nose the
clouds black as the old crow the evil in
the eyes the compasion in the heart

The raven falls from the sky once again
tell me I don't have the luxury of all
and by and again. Just remind do what you
can for whats done is done what was then
was then just look onto yourself of this
time and only now.

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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gemjop
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since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA
1 posted 2003-08-03 06:39 PM


waves crushing in upon my toes

Loved this line!

Instant karma's gonna get you.

Tequilia_Sunrise
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since 2003-02-19
Posts 612
Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada
2 posted 2003-08-13 03:17 PM


great write! thank-you for sharing

Tequilia

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