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Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
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Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2003-08-03 04:03 PM



Bleeding hearts troublesome eyes
makes me think of things time
and time. then the colors fade
to black. no time to go no time
to look back.

Shudder at the years to come
wondering if I'll ever belong
try hard to fit try hard to fight
no matter what I'll make things right

Bring the ground under my feet
smile at the people I meet
turn around and look inside myself

Go in time to another place
take myself to a lonley time
deep thoughts of solitude and
disbelieft. come back to reality
before things go in to deep.

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2003-08-03 04:24 PM


This reminded me of last night...I was thinking sad thoughts about my sons...concerning missed opportunities, due to a divorce and although I like to take the time to understand my failures I felt like the pain was too intense and my feelings were so melancholy...a little later I met my one of my friends and she ask me what I was thinking about and I shared a little bit with her and I felt so much better...in a few I was smiling and laughing and having a good time with my friend...thank God for friends...James
Foxyoasis
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Atlantic Beach,Fla
2 posted 2003-08-05 12:58 PM


i agree to that !

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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