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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2003-08-03 03:59 PM


Seeing

Looking into her eyes
I see those things
I wish to see.
I see acceptance.
Desire I see.
I see me
needing her.
I see her
needing me.

JamesLee
August03
2003

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Foxyoasis
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1 posted 2003-08-03 04:13 PM


I love your poems so much love and care i can feel goes into them. please keep writting

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


Kahlil
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2 posted 2003-08-03 04:17 PM


yes, James, acceptance and desire...sigh...
~K~

gemjop
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3 posted 2003-08-03 06:24 PM


James, reminded me of the beatles song 'You Know What To Do'
so if you need me,
just like i need you
you know what to dooooo
just call on me when youre lonely
i'll keep my love for you only

That knowing feeling is gorgeous isn't it. to be needed and wanted. sigh.

enjoying you as always.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

SharaRose
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4 posted 2003-08-04 01:46 AM


As sweet as can be. Loved this.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

passing shadows
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5 posted 2003-08-04 05:16 AM


hmmm...nice concept...nice feeling
Ericc
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6 posted 2003-08-04 07:33 AM


Beautiful reflection.
Eric

Janette
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7 posted 2003-08-04 10:46 AM


And that is the way it is supposed to be ... ahhhhhhh love, gotta love it.

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

angelblueyes
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8 posted 2003-08-04 11:05 AM


I always enjoy your writes.This one was well done.The acceptance is a great gift.
angelblueyes

LeeJ
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9 posted 2003-08-04 12:30 PM


and the need goes beyond self gratification, but more so...wanting to see each other happy.
JamesMichael
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10 posted 2003-12-24 07:32 PM


Thank you all for the wonderful responses...James
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