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JamesMichael
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0 posted 08-03-2003 03:59 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for JamesMichael

Seeing

Looking into her eyes
I see those things
I wish to see.
I see acceptance.
Desire I see.
I see me
needing her.
I see her
needing me.

JamesLee
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2003
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Foxyoasis
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1 posted 08-03-2003 04:13 PM       View Profile for Foxyoasis   Email Foxyoasis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Foxyoasis

I love your poems so much love and care i can feel goes into them. please keep writting

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

Kahlil
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2 posted 08-03-2003 04:17 PM       View Profile for Kahlil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kahlil

yes, James, acceptance and desire...sigh...
~K~
gemjop
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3 posted 08-03-2003 06:24 PM       View Profile for gemjop   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for gemjop

James, reminded me of the beatles song 'You Know What To Do'
so if you need me,
just like i need you
you know what to dooooo
just call on me when youre lonely
i'll keep my love for you only

That knowing feeling is gorgeous isn't it. to be needed and wanted. sigh.

enjoying you as always.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

SharaRose
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4 posted 08-04-2003 01:46 AM       View Profile for SharaRose   Email SharaRose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SharaRose

As sweet as can be. Loved this.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

passing shadows
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5 posted 08-04-2003 05:16 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

hmmm...nice concept...nice feeling
Ericc
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6 posted 08-04-2003 07:33 AM       View Profile for Ericc   Email Ericc   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ericc

Beautiful reflection.
Eric
Janette
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7 posted 08-04-2003 10:46 AM       View Profile for Janette   Email Janette   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janette

And that is the way it is supposed to be ... ahhhhhhh love, gotta love it.

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

angelblueyes
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8 posted 08-04-2003 11:05 AM       View Profile for angelblueyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angelblueyes

I always enjoy your writes.This one was well done.The acceptance is a great gift.
angelblueyes
LeeJ
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9 posted 08-04-2003 12:30 PM       View Profile for LeeJ   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LeeJ

and the need goes beyond self gratification, but more so...wanting to see each other happy.
JamesMichael
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10 posted 12-24-2003 07:32 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Thank you all for the wonderful responses...James
 
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