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Titia Geertman
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0 posted 2003-08-03 02:36 PM




Come forward, stay in wind's soft breeze
Lift up your face, inhale real deep
You'll feel my touch there on your face
I'm sending lots of hugs to keep

And when you think you feel like ice
Just turn your face towards the light
In beams of sun they'll touch your skin
They'll find a home there in your mind


Inspired by your answer to Krawdads beautiful senryu.

Titia


Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

[This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (08-03-2003 08:35 PM).]

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Ceinwyn
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1 posted 2003-08-03 03:14 PM


Titia!? you've made me cry....this is the sweetest poem in the world...I hate when I'm speechless..you're such a sweetie!!   thank you!!

ps btw I always wanted to say this but you kinda look like my step mum..haha sorry don't mean to freak you out


If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

[This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (08-03-2003 03:19 PM).]

skyshine
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2 posted 2003-08-03 03:26 PM


That was beautiful, Titia!

~Elizabeth

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

gemjop
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3 posted 2003-08-03 06:43 PM


AWWWWW. that was so comforting to read Titia, you have such a warm heart.

To my library...for when i need some warm thoughts.


gem
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Earth Angel
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4 posted 2003-08-03 06:50 PM


--for Ceinwyn by Titia!--Had to click on this one! Yep! My pleasure was doubled!--especially after reading Kristen's reply!

You are both special!

Linda

Titia Geertman
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5 posted 2003-08-03 08:40 PM



You're welcome Kristen, LOL I think I like your step Mom already

Hope she's giving you lots of hugs too.

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

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