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Sunshine
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0 posted 2003-08-03 11:18 AM



Mountains & Bays





Yosemite’s face, an exquisite site
Two Hundred and One miles from Monterey
Where waterfalls sheer fall all through the night
Yosemite’s face, an exquisite site
Quick as a blink, only four hours away
Travel a slick trip to a peaceful bay
Yosemite’s face, an exquisite site
Two Hundred and One miles from Monterey





© Copyright 2003 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-08-03 11:50 AM


Thank you, Karilea!!!  
This is so pretty....and it's going
straight to my folder to keep.
Hugs  
Ethel

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2 posted 2003-08-03 12:12 PM


OH WOW!!!!
Beautiful Karilea!!
Love the pics as well...
Gives me wanderlust.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

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3 posted 2003-08-03 01:50 PM


god I love the pics and the words as well..but I'm mesmorized by the waterfall...ummmm....sooo peaceful...

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4 posted 2003-08-03 05:12 PM


Very very beautiful Karilea.

Maree

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whose cooking  smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)


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5 posted 2003-08-04 03:19 AM



This is too beautiful not to be seen....

Me

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6 posted 2003-08-04 08:36 AM


Karilea, take me there! Sounds and looks beautiful and serene!

A stunning triolet.

much love
gem
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7 posted 2003-08-04 09:46 AM


loved the pictures- and the poem

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8 posted 2003-08-04 12:55 PM


breathtakingly beautiful....
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9 posted 2003-08-04 02:53 PM


Yosemite Sunshine!

Dern tutin!

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10 posted 2003-08-04 03:20 PM


I simply have to read more carefully, i havent slept so my site is blurred but i swear i thought i saw..for Ethel's Toilet
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11 posted 2003-08-04 09:38 PM


I do love this, Karilea.
It's so beautiful.  

Hugs  
Ethel

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (08-04-2003 10:28 PM).]

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12 posted 2003-08-04 09:39 PM


What a free-fall!  Loved this. TD
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13 posted 2003-08-04 09:49 PM


Your words and the photos caught my breath with their majesty!


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beautiful!
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