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HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2003-08-03 09:51 AM

Treat Carefully Please

Where are my wings
Where should I soar
There is a poem in me
A heart awaits to pour

Who would befriend
Who would be there
Never can I be certain
Still I needed to share

Where could I begin
Where was it going
Would timing be right
With fairness flowing

Could I safely reveal
Could our love grow
My heart in question
Had wanted to know

Would you be gentle
Would you appease
Remember its fragile
Treat carefully please

Hope©2003

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

1 posted 2003-08-03 09:52 AM

HopeS - I'm sure if you were to show them these words, they would treat carefully. Best to you...

BC

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

2 posted 2003-08-03 10:00 AM

thank you Bill for sharing your kindness in your reply .... but my heart is always cautious ... words to help me translate

Hope

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2003-08-03 10:05 AM

HopeS
A delight to read.

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

4 posted 2003-08-03 10:13 AM

Thank You Seymour , so pleased you enjoyed

Hope

Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

5 posted 2003-08-03 10:13 AM

Oh Hope...I know this! But I just set the words free with my pen...never for his eyes to see or ears to hear...My heart it is too fragile.

Love your work! 'Tis a labor of love.

Patricia

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

6 posted 2003-08-03 10:23 AM

Would you be gentle
Would you appease
Remember its fragile
Treat carefully please

Hope, I truly hope that anyone who would read your words would be gentle....they are not only words, but your heart. Thank you for sharing your heart with us.

Hugs

Ethel

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

7 posted 2003-08-03 10:25 AM

thank you Patricia for understanding , yes writing as helped me so much

Hope

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

8 posted 2003-08-03 10:27 AM

Ethel I thank you for caring and sharing , it truly is appreciated

Hope

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

9 posted 2003-08-12 11:39 PM

Beautifully and gently expressed, Hope.
I do hope that your heart is being treated carefully.
Hugs,
~Vicky
"My friends are my estate."
~Emily Dickinson

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