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TWENTY OR LESS...#132
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
TWENTY OR LESS…#132 Copyright 2003 by:Mark V Sheldon Nostalgia passes under nostrils Each street thumbs youth again Summoned memories invade my search for myself You CAN make a difference: |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Each street thumbs youth again ============================== now thats a cool line... so it this "Nostalgia passes under nostrils" aint that the truth too...how one scent can take you back to your childhood or a long put away memory. I love when that happends. Hey Mark... so good to read you today...I see youre still inpiring the forums to say more with less.... my muse is still long winded (when it finally shows)  lolWell done poet sir.  "How could I stand here with you and not be moved by you." |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...a volume in twenty(or less!) Excellent! Eric |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
SHEESH! There you go again, leaving the scent of Mark upon my being.  nice aroma therapy session, and now my thumb is twitching |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Mark, Very much said in so little words. Susan C. |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Mark, A scent, a sound, a touch is so easy to reignite the memories of the past.Well done  angelblueyes |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Perfect Mark...you do these so very well! ~Summertime Smiles, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MARK, What JM said, you did it again. |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
yes so very little words...short sweet to the point..and sometimes I wish my nose was stuffed up... If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Summoned memories invade my search for myself Yes they can invade, sometimes it's a good invasion, a reminder and sometimes a hinderance trying to hold on to the past..am i making sense? I'm slightly hung over |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Hi Janet Marie -- it's nice to hear from you again. Thank you for the kind words, and I look forward to your Muse's offerings once more, regardless of length. Thanks Eric. Loved your last poem! Kacy:  Crystal: so true. The speed of memory recall/time travel through scent is dizzying -- must be direct-connect with primordial instincts... Nancy: Perfect...? How about continually evolving instead? Thanks for the smiles. Sy: ...I'm not sure what I did again, but I thank you for your support. Ceinwyn: ...but if your nose were stuffed up you'd miss the ambrosia of once upon a time... Raph -- perfect sense. Hey, here's an idea for you: how about writing a poem through the point of view of someone with a hangover? That could be VERY interesting... -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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