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mpt
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since 2001-07-22
Posts 32
australia

0 posted 2003-08-03 03:33 AM


this is something i wrote, to express my love of hiphop, which has opened my eyes to a whole new world, including poetry, and hopefully can open many others to more and more ways of expressing themselves
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what the 4 elements really mean to me
is something thats hard to express lyrically
ive been learning hiphop for the last 10 years
its always helped me grow and nursed me thru the tears
i couldnt imagine my life without its influence
its helped my intelligence grow to an affluence
it encourages me to be less judgemental
creatively, it lets me be experimental
those who have never tasted pure hiphop
sit alone in their sadness, never lettin rhymes drop
stewin in their emotions, never expressin themselves
but ive tasted the freedom, into my mind i delve
but it aint jus bout writin rhymes from in ya head
its also about art, respect, street cred
graffiti for so long now has been a taboo
a crime for u to commit, have the law chasin you
nowadays ppl pay for graff to grace their walls
no longer is it illegal, if its in museum halls
and so many times i hear, 'vinyls dead and gone'
but not in hiphop, its beauty lives on
the raw, undigitalised method of music
analog beats r the way i choose it
to some ppl the scratchin is irritating
they just dont know, to me its elevating
manipulation of beat, mastery of sound
no longer does a record, jus spin around
back and forth is the way i like to hear
as a musical instrument, turntables have no peer
and last but not least, we have breakdancin
i love poppin and lockin, and b-boy stancin
who woulda thout that a few years ago
id have seen b-boys in perth, rippin up their flow
graff goin up with a dj on the decks
hiphop has made it, this quick i didnt expect
i jus hope there are others who will make hiphop stay
true to the elements which have propelled it to this day



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Kahlil
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since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881

1 posted 2003-08-03 04:15 AM


I'm sure hip hop is here to stay, and it should, as it speaks our current culture.  I like the sound of your write.  I hope you'll keep posting your writings which are likely to educate us!  And isn't that what poetry is about...tell a story...find a common ground, and connections...Please keep sharing!
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