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Open Poetry #28

My Leading Of Follow

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-08-03 03:18 AM

My Leading Of Follow

if I could
travel time
I would
be there
a journey of
movement in air
no steps back
advancements crawl
that I go
to with hurry
catch me
break this fall
I proceed
I ascend
missed my rising
once before
but this time
I flow in
my leading
of follow
*000*

"I am living a life, i have no wish to live. How did this happen?" Unknown

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-08-03 03:20 AM

Slick,

You have changed my perceptive.

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

2 posted 2003-08-03 03:23 AM

and you change mine
hands are only worthy
when
held out
and held

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

3 posted 2003-08-03 02:26 PM

reaches out hands to H..c'mere hugs grin

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

4 posted 2003-08-05 12:31 PM

Woo, reading this poem is like backing with mirrors instead of looking over your shoulder....everything is back backward toward the other front......

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______________Ratleader______________

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2003-09-19 11:54 PM

Helen, I'm reaching my hand through this screen
and taking this delight of a poem to the front for
another round.

Hugs to you, sweet lady

Ethel

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

6 posted 2003-09-20 12:00 PM

And I, for one, am glad that Ethel brought
this one back to the top.

Just wonderful, Helen...love this.
When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

7 posted 2003-09-20 11:06 PM

In simple terms -

DITTO!

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