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Krawdad
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0 posted 2003-08-03 12:57 PM




Such simple pleasure
The touch of another hand
Fears melt in that warmth



Kraw'
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[This message has been edited by Krawdad (08-03-2003 01:13 AM).]

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Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
1 posted 2003-08-03 01:22 AM


Wow, just wow..So much spoken in so few words.
garysgirl
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2 posted 2003-08-03 01:35 AM


You do these so beautifully, Krawdad.  
Hugs  
Ethel

Honeybee
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3 posted 2003-08-03 02:21 AM


This is beautiful, simple, yet powerfully so.

Melissa

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2003-08-03 04:22 AM


if only...sigh
1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
5 posted 2003-08-03 04:53 AM


you inspire...
In Reach

I am as close as
the lines in your fingerprints
and the air you breathe

Patricia
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Missouri
6 posted 2003-08-03 08:02 AM


Such a great pleasure to read your beautiful words!

Patricia

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
7 posted 2003-08-03 08:07 AM


Krawdad
That about sais it.

Susan Caldwell
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Florida
8 posted 2003-08-03 11:44 AM


Yes..if you find the right hand.

Beautiful.

Susan C.

Ceinwyn
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9 posted 2003-08-03 01:51 PM


I'm like an ice cube..& a simple touch sounds so nice right about now...this was lovely...

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Titia Geertman
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Netherlands
10 posted 2003-08-03 02:26 PM




I felt your touch of hands
and my heart melted right away
Even over oceans wide
your words came through I'd say


Titia


Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
11 posted 2003-08-03 02:30 PM


Lovely...very lovely.
~Hugs~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
12 posted 2003-08-03 02:39 PM


Ok you guys are killing me today with these..heartstrings twangged
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
13 posted 2003-08-03 02:40 PM


So true, so very, very true...


EA

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
14 posted 2003-08-03 02:44 PM



Simply
Beautiful!

JamesMichael
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15 posted 2003-08-03 03:40 PM


Very, very nice...James
Krawdad
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16 posted 2003-08-04 01:09 AM


Thanks to icebox for the inspiration.
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Kaoru,
Thank you.
Ethel,
Thanks for the compliment.  Hugs back.
Melissa,
Glad you liked.
Dixie,
"Keep the faith"
Helen,
Love to . . . Thanks so much.  **
Patricia,
Glad you enjoyed.
Seymour.
Thanks for stopping by.
Susan,
The hand we all seek.  Thank you.
Ceinwyn,
Hope it's warmer there.
Titia,
And a response in verse melts me every time.
Thank you.
Nancy Lee,
Thank you.  Hugs back.
Aenimal,
Pluck, pluck . . . :-)
EA,
You know . . .
Sunshine,
Thank you.
James,
Glad you liked.

SharaRose
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Somewhere out there~
17 posted 2003-08-04 02:15 AM


Breathtaking.


Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Jason Lyle
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With my darkling
18 posted 2003-08-04 03:37 AM


Very cool, condensed and intense.

Jason

suthern
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19 posted 2003-08-04 12:25 PM


Yes... they do. *S*

I like this very much! *S*

VAS
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20 posted 2003-08-04 01:06 PM


AMEN!!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Local Rebel
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Southern Abstentia
21 posted 2003-08-04 02:20 PM


yep

just

yep

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
22 posted 2003-08-04 02:55 PM


I believe so
M

Krawdad
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23 posted 2003-08-04 06:44 PM


SharaRose,
Such flattery . . . and I'll take it, thanks.
Jason Lyle,
Glad you enjoyed this.
suthern,
Indeed, and pleased that you like.
VAS,
YES!
Local Rebel,
You know it.
nakdthoughts,
Can't be denied, M.

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