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Earth Angel
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0 posted 2003-08-03 12:52 PM



+*+*+
With rising of sun,
Mountain top reflects the rays
Into the depths of valley.
+*+*+


Note:
The Katauta is an unrhymed,
3-line poem with the syllable
counts of 5/7/7.

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (08-03-2003 12:55 AM).]

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1 posted 2003-08-03 01:17 AM


This is just lovely
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2 posted 2003-08-03 01:20 AM


I like it!

{now if I can just remember that name . . .}

Kraw'

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3 posted 2003-08-03 01:38 AM


i like this,, very nice..
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4 posted 2003-08-03 01:43 AM


Well, looky here...our Linda is teaching us another
form of poetry. I love this, my friend.
Hugs  
Ethel

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5 posted 2003-08-03 02:33 AM


This is wonderful....I may have to try this new form

Melissa~

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6 posted 2003-08-03 05:54 AM


Lovely...James
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7 posted 2003-08-03 07:29 AM


http://poetry-magazine.com/poetry/poetry-009/08page.htm

Our own Nan wrote specifically of this form in the Digital Passions #9 published Wednesday, July 18, 2001.  In there, she said,
quote:
Although Haiku was the first of its kind to find its way to the Western world, it's merely one of many Japanese variations of the 5-7 poetic form. Numerous variations have developed over the centuries, and a select few have recently begun to permeate contemporary Western literary culture. Tanka is becoming quite a well-known poetic form in today's literary world, with Senryu following dutifully behind. These poetic forms, of course, are preceded by many others…

According to researchers of ancient Japanese poetry, the Katauta is recognized as their "basic unit of poetry." It incorporates a 5-7-7 onji format, or a total of 19 syllables. It has a specific rhythm and takes the form of either posing a question or giving an answer.

An expanded version of Katauta is used in both the Mondo and the Sedoka, which duplicate the syllabic pattern with 5-7-7-5-7-7, a total of 38 onji. The Mondo has two distinct parts. First a question is posed, then a subsequent answer is written by a separate author. A distinct rhythm break occurs in the middle of this structure where the question and answer join. Sedoka is similar to a Mondo in that it also consists of two parts (one pair) of Katauta. The difference is that Sedoka were written by a single author and did not generally consist of a question and answer part.


You'll laugh, Linda, to know that when I went to learn of this form, thinking it sounded familiar, Google showed the above link as #8 of the first top 10 resources by which to learn more about Katauta.

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8 posted 2003-08-03 08:13 AM


How beautiful this is...and I always learn something new from you, EA!

Patricia  

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9 posted 2003-08-03 08:17 AM


Linda - and as the sun's rays light up the valley I can see your poem in motion...

BC

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10 posted 2003-08-03 10:38 AM


These explorations into different forms are such fun...and you show us how!  Nicely done.  KJ

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The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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11 posted 2003-08-03 10:59 AM


Kaoru ~

Good morning!--and thank you!

Huggums,
Linda

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12 posted 2003-08-03 11:00 AM


Kraw' ~

I'd love to read a Krawdad Katauta!

Luvs 'n hugs,
EA

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13 posted 2003-08-03 11:01 AM


Q ~

Sending nice hugs for a "nice" reply!

EA

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Ethel ~

Why thank you, dear friend!

Lovin' hugs,
Linda

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15 posted 2003-08-03 11:02 AM


Melissa ~

I came across this form and thought I'd try one!

Warm hugs 'n smiles,
Linda

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16 posted 2003-08-03 11:02 AM


EA, Beautiful as always.You touch my heart with your words.
angelblueyes

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17 posted 2003-08-03 11:04 AM


Aloha, James!

"Lovely"
is such a
lovely reply!

Aloha,
Linda


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18 posted 2003-08-03 11:07 AM


Sunshine ~

THANK YOU!--and a "THANK YOU" to Nan as well! ...I have now saved this to my personal file on Poetry Forms!

Have a glorious day, Dear Solar Orb!

Huggums,
Linda

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19 posted 2003-08-03 11:08 AM


Patricia ~

Why, thank you, perky Patricia!


Linda

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20 posted 2003-08-03 11:09 AM


BC ~

--how poetic of you! Thank you, my friend!

Huggums,
Linda

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21 posted 2003-08-03 11:11 AM


KJ ~

You're back!--to stay, I hope! I wondered where you had been off to! Staying out of trouble I trust!--but that wouldn't have been much fun!

Yeppers, trying out new forms is fun!

Luvin' hugs,
EA

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22 posted 2003-08-03 11:14 AM


angelblueyes ~

Good morning, Dear Blue-eyed Angel! You popped in while I was writing my replies! Good to hear from you, as always!

Thank you for the sweet reply!

May your day be a joyous one!

Lovin' hugs,
EA

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23 posted 2003-09-15 12:52 PM





                               

Earth Angel
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24 posted 2003-09-15 02:09 AM


Q ~

This certainly was a pleasant surprise!

I love how you go bump in the night! lol


EA

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25 posted 2003-09-15 12:23 PM




(smiles) Yay! Oh Linda, I just love your versatility, sweet friend, now I saved the guidelines to making one of these so eventually I can try too, yay! (kiss on cheek) Sunrises are sooooooo pretty too, sweet friend, when I'm by the ocean they're the most spectacular, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Earth Angel
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26 posted 2003-09-15 02:20 PM


Hi, Noah! I agree, ocean sunsets are spectacular!

It's fun trying different poetic forms. You should write a katauta! I'll keep a look out for one by the illustrious Mistletoe Angel!

Lovin' hugs,
EA

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