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I Don't Have To Admit It In The Daytime
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I Don't Have To Admit It In The Daytime |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows 
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Solitary nights walking with a waxing moon I miss holding hands ©2003 by icebox |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
This speaks volumes.. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Well said, ice..... your gift expresses itself as well in this form as in your longer pieces. Thanks for this. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
damn it this hurt..yes and I'll admit it anytime of day..well except morning because I don't want anybody near me until i've completely woken up |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Such simple pleasure The touch of another hand Fears melt in that warmth Kraw' |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Icy, I would hold your hand any day of the week as long as you told me stories while we did. I love your stories...I love how you write them. I am your #1 fan (in a non-Kathy Bates in "Misery" way). Susan C. |
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Riley
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
 * the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes * |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
ache with you |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Separate we come, and separate we go, And this be it known, is all that we know. -- Conrad Aiken haiku is a high form -- well done |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
 ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
short..but still stings... If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
icebox Well that sure says alot, enjoyed. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
had to bump this again..short and simple like a dagger through the heart |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
damn. yessssss me too. oooh i have found so many treasures for my library today! lucky arent i? thanks Ice...  Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
a lot in a little. i understand. -majnu |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh, you're good |
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scuffedshoe2 Junior Member
since 2003-08-04
Posts 39 |
i was looking for change in my left pocket when i felt the sand at the bottom i remembered how it got there and smiled. i love it -ian |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Choked me up. Just couldn't speak if I wanted to, if I were standing there. Gets me right here. (holding hand near my heart)Wow.  SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
So do I. *S* Such a simple touch... and it means so much. *S* |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Kaoru ~ Thank you for reading this and for taking time to comment. Ratleader ~ Thank you, your comment means a lot to me. Martie ~ Aenimal ~ Ahhhh...the secret there is not to get up in the morning! *smile* Thank you for your comment. Krawdad ~ To remember warmth To recall the spirit's touch Defines bittersweet Susan Caldwell ~ What a nice compliment! That means you won't break my ankles right? *grin* Riley ~ Thanks! Kahlil ~ Let's laugh instead. *smile* Local Rebel ~ Cast from the Void Separated by birth Seeking oneness with another Enchantress ~ That is sweet, thanks! Ceinwyn ~ Just poignant that's all. Seymour Tabin ~ Thank you for reading and for taking time to comment. gemjop ~ Thank you! majnu ~ Sometimes a little can mean a lot. *smile* Thanks! passing shadows ~ Well, I don't know about "good" but I try to contain evil to a small area. scuffedshoe2 ~ Abandoned hairbrush Holding stray hairs that were you Waiting patiently SharaRose ~ I hope you are OK by now! suthern ~ Your comments are such, for me. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
A BUMP to this, because I haven't had my icebox fix in three days.....figure I'm not alone, so I'll save 'em the search.... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Maybe dear icebox if you admitted it in the daytime you could find that hand to hold during the lonely nights! Just a thought. You expressed longing so powerfully. Nothing hurts more than remembering warmth and love when there is none now Hugs. Margherita |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
well done bud... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Icy, LMAO...so you saw the movie?? The book was better.... Susan |
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Abe Senior Member
since 2003-05-28
Posts 694Looks like Vero Beach, FL until the end! |
Yes! Del "Abe" Jones |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
A deep longing for Walks on the beach, holding hands In the still of night Iceman, I know the feeling...when my Honey-Love has to be out of town. It gets so lonesome.  Hugs Ehtel |
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