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Jason Lyle
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With my darkling

0 posted 2003-08-02 09:37 PM


"haha...am I glad to see you, its more friendly with two"

she slams pooh bear on
the table again

and throws her head back
in laughter

when he talks

and I am disgusted
with myself
that I ever bothered
to search for
deeper meaning

than this

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inkedgoddess
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1 posted 2003-08-02 09:58 PM


poor poo, now if only it was barney, my son would surely relate, even he liked poo
garysgirl
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2 posted 2003-08-02 10:00 PM


Awwww Jason...I like old Pooh bear.  
Hugs  
Ethel

ThisDiamond
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3 posted 2003-08-02 10:00 PM


Quite provocative...
The unexpected...good write. TD

Jason Lyle
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With my darkling
4 posted 2003-08-02 10:13 PM


sorry folks, her pooh is broken.he only talks with a good slam.

Jason

Gina Culliney
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5 posted 2003-08-03 07:58 PM


Can't we learn so much from child's play?
Isn't it wonderful to know life in its simplicity through their eyes.  Wonderful kodak snapshot put down in the pen, Darkling.
By the way, did pooh survive the slam dunking????

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6 posted 2003-08-03 09:06 PM


oh pooh! and I was searching for some very deep meaning in this!
Hmm. Perhaps another read will reveal a layer I missed with the first slam?
LOL, enjoyed this one.

vlraynes
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7 posted 2003-08-26 04:39 AM



Oh yes...this made me smile, Jason...

Thank you...

"My friends are my estate."
~Emily Dickinson

passing shadows
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8 posted 2003-08-26 05:09 AM


oh my...forgive my outburst of giggle here

this is great!

SharaRose
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9 posted 2003-08-26 08:54 AM


Awww how sweet is this! You can tell how much you admire her. Just being with her is enough. Cute one... Ouch for poor Pooh Bear. SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

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