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QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

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0 posted 2003-08-02 08:42 PM

she smiles at thoughts

of a secret encounter

there is sound of rainfall

and she fantasizes that

i'm there too

[This message has been edited by QjQ (08-02-2003 11:05 PM).]

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2003-08-02 09:03 PM

Beautifully done. Just one small nitpick. Shouldn't it read? "there are sounds of rainfall"
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

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Realms of Light

2 posted 2003-08-02 09:08 PM

Hmm! Methinks your still water runs deep!

EA

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
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3 posted 2003-08-02 11:12 PM

thanks "kethry" your nitpicks are welcome!!

"earth angel" still water runs deep n cold,,
your comments are always welcome,,

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

4 posted 2003-08-03 03:15 AM

This one has a really nice smooth flow to it, and I especially enjoyed the ending!!! ~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

5 posted 2003-08-03 05:44 AM

I love fantasies! don't you! great thoughts!

thanks~ARH

Patricia
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since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

6 posted 2003-08-03 08:00 AM

Enjoyed this Q...it makes me think of him!

Patricia

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2003-08-03 08:14 AM

QjQ
Well done enjoyed.

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

8 posted 2003-08-03 09:51 AM

QjQ - now that would be a perfect meeting, wonder if she has a sister?

BC

JilGirl
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since 2003-05-24

Posts 364
Washington

9 posted 2003-08-04 06:23 AM

Such a great picture
painted with so few words!
You have a knack!
(Take your umbrella with you!)

'Tiz feathers that make the bird -
Always remember to keep them fluffed
but, never, EVER ruffle them!

Ratleader

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since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

10 posted 2003-08-04 10:07 AM

I can see her face....you done good, Q!

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MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

11 posted 2003-08-04 10:17 AM

An ego-boosting remote view...

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27

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Florida

12 posted 2003-08-04 10:19 AM

QJQ,

YES! I do that to!!

Very nice!

Susan C.

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

13 posted 2003-08-12 11:56 PM

Beautifully said, my friend.
"My friends are my estate."
~Emily Dickinson

Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

14 posted 2003-08-13 12:01 PM

Beautifully said, indeed!

Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

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Riding

15 posted 2003-08-13 01:14 AM

ehehehehe I love this!!!

There's just no other words, I love it!!!

There's nothing like a good fight with a horse to put your problems into perspective

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

16 posted 2003-08-13 01:59 AM

nice sentiment for sure!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

17 posted 2003-08-13 02:35 AM

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

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Perth Western Australia

18 posted 2003-08-13 04:37 AM

Yes !! I do smile at the thoughts

Hope

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

19 posted 2003-08-13 06:39 AM

what an ego,
can u back it up?

gringakiwi
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since 2003-08-05

Posts 189

20 posted 2003-08-13 08:57 AM

pretty little poem....

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