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JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2003-08-02 06:08 PM


Layers

Love unfolding
in beautiful layers.

Slowly,
love reveals
loves ways.

For all
who's hearts
are willing.

Love,
will have
loves say.

JamesLee
August02
2003

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2003-08-02 06:17 PM


Why would we want to fight love's way? And still we do at times.
Letting go and surrender is the best, as you say lovingly.
Love, Margherita

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
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Staffordshire, England
2 posted 2003-08-02 08:23 PM


This is so lovely...layer after layer, love just seems to replenish itself. I appreciated this beautiful piece very much...~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
3 posted 2003-08-02 08:51 PM


This is so onionlike. I peeled off the layers and found tears in my eyes.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
4 posted 2003-08-02 09:13 PM


lol Excuse me, I'm still laughing at Kethry's reply! She's the queen of one-liners! --and you, Dear James are the loving king...


EA

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19
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Somewhere out there~
5 posted 2003-08-02 09:16 PM


Oh, this was sweet as can be. Sweet, sweet words. I was so taken with this like breathtaking. Wow. There must be someone very special to inspire this in your heart.
Lovely to read.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
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highways, & byways, for now
6 posted 2003-08-02 09:19 PM


James - you know of love well...

BC

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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New York
7 posted 2003-08-03 12:05 PM


Exactly James!
nicely penned
only those who know
xxoo  

SimplyGold
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Posts 1453

8 posted 2003-08-03 09:05 PM


James,
I'm listening. Beautiful!
SG

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
9 posted 2003-08-03 11:05 PM


Absolutely beautiful, James.

"To love, is to receive
a glimpse into heaven"

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

garysgirl
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10 posted 2003-08-03 11:38 PM


James, this is so sweet.  
Hugs  
Ethel

Mistletoe Angel
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11 posted 2003-09-20 03:53 PM




(smiles) Oh James, this is beautiful, sweet friend, that's why love is so beautiful, as it has neverending layers yet you know in the core of it all rests a most precious light! (big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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Sydney, Australia
12 posted 2003-09-21 03:18 AM


James - beautifully written - oh to be in love again!
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