navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #28 » from out of the blue
Open Poetry #28
Post A Reply Post New Topic from out of the blue Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Midnitesun
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647
Gaia

0 posted 2003-08-02 06:02 PM


from out of the blue
I came to you

and you wept

in my arms
free of harms
pathway

restful repose
in the brush of a moment,
the blush of a lover's smile

from out of the blue
I came to you

and you wept

I wiped your tears with a kiss
free of conditions,
no return required

and we both wept
the joy
of life
as it spilled over into

LOVE

  

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (08-02-2003 06:03 PM).]

© Copyright 2003 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2003-08-02 06:13 PM


Fantastic write and love, dear Kacy!
Wonderful tenderness and awareness of the power of unconditional love.
Love, Margherita

Midnitesun
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647
Gaia
2 posted 2003-08-02 06:57 PM


thank you for your comments, Margherita
kayjay
Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015
Oregon
3 posted 2003-08-02 07:18 PM


Well done, Kacy!  How often we greet love with tears of joy, as if we flee from pain.  Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350
the ass-end of space
4 posted 2003-08-02 07:22 PM


Nice to see you kacy how's the move? all done?
Marge Tindal
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores
5 posted 2003-08-02 08:10 PM


MidniteSun~
My god, but this is BEAUTIFUL~
*sighing* deeply~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
6 posted 2003-08-02 08:14 PM


Midnitesun
Well done, enjoyed.

Duncan
Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455

7 posted 2003-08-02 08:42 PM


"and we both wept
the joy
of life
as it spilled over into

LOVE"

This vacation is sounding very good on you Kacy!  


Wind
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Elite
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981

8 posted 2003-08-02 09:08 PM


"From out of the blue,
I came to you"

love tose lines

insanity is not a crime

Local Rebel
Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767
Southern Abstentia
9 posted 2003-08-02 09:09 PM


this is your better vehicle Kacy... camel hair bikinis are nice -- but -- this is you naked!
littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
10 posted 2003-08-02 10:03 PM


Jesus, this is beautiful Kacy . . .
xxoo

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
11 posted 2003-08-02 11:31 PM


This is so special, I envy you in blue Kacy~

[This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (08-02-2003 11:32 PM).]

Midnitesun
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647
Gaia
12 posted 2003-08-03 12:29 PM


Huge *sighs* of thanks to each of you for sharing your heartbeats.
I finished moving Tuesday, left for vacation Wednesday, should be back online at home by next  Friday.
Namaste, friends.
LOL at that naked comment, Reb.

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (08-03-2003 10:20 AM).]

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
13 posted 2003-08-03 05:46 AM


There are some women that I feel very comfortable around...I think it has something to do with living similar experiences...so the understanding is there...James
Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

14 posted 2003-08-03 12:03 PM


Kacy this is a gem of pen...love the tender honesty of it. Enjoy the blue...magic happends there

"How could I stand here with you and not be moved by you."

LH

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
15 posted 2003-08-03 12:23 PM


Sometimes our discoveries derived without the search are the most rewarding ones and most meaningful.  I enjoyed it much.
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
16 posted 2003-08-03 01:07 PM


great feeling, ain't it?


Ceinwyn
Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175
VA
17 posted 2003-08-03 01:57 PM


overflowing emotions....Love is great...so I hear....I wouldn't know..

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace
18 posted 2003-08-03 02:04 PM


oh this is just so beautiful...h
suthern
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Seraphic
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723
Louisiana
19 posted 2003-08-04 10:22 AM


This is one of your best... and one for my library. *S* Excellent! *S*
Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
20 posted 2003-08-04 10:27 AM


"from out of the blue
I came to you

and you wept"

ahhh yes...to just know when they need you most...

beautiful.

Susan C.


vandana
Deputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Patricius
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463
USA
21 posted 2003-08-05 08:17 PM


enjoyed
Saunni
Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777
West Virginia
22 posted 2003-08-05 09:09 PM


Simply, simply awesome!! I loved it!

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain.

Kahlil
Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881

23 posted 2003-08-05 09:22 PM


This is just beautiful Kacy.  Embrace and enjoy this time in your life.
(Camel hair bikini AGAIN, hahaha)  ~K~

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #28 » from out of the blue

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary