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Margherita
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Eternity

0 posted 2003-08-02 05:39 PM





My mind drifts into silence
raising above all earthly sounds.
I cross the threshold to open space,
where I can breathe,
liberated from chains,
meeting my fate.
Ego can wait.

I surrender to the call of mystery,
floating in unknown realms,
my soul in quiet expectation,
a blank tape recording
pure waves of Love,
the Source of all Life.

I find you waiting in the gap.
Two souls on a ride Home,
following our hearts’ song.
A powerful, familiar tune
like a Mother’s sweet voice
filtering through the womb.

Irresistible gravity sucks us
into the darkness of a Black Hole.
Awareness dawns of a revelation
greater than we have ever known.
The Light suddenly explodes,
as pure sparkles we join
the dance of sublime bliss.

All longing is met,
all thirst is stilled,
all desires are fulfilled.

We reach the highest peak of Love
becoming One with All there is,
each particle celebrating
in crazy acceleration
the ultimate Touch
of the Divine.

Now, infinite peace remains,
a gift of our shared ecstasy,
as dancing Light and Love,
vibrating in unison
to the Pulse of Universe,
as One.

© Copyright 2003 Margherita Rueger - All Rights Reserved
SharaRose
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Somewhere out there~
1 posted 2003-08-02 05:43 PM


Sounds like Heaven!!!

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2003-08-02 05:50 PM



I surrender to the call of mystery,
floating in unknown realms,
my soul in quiet expectation,
a blank tape recording
pure waves of Love,
the Source of all Life.

~*~

This has some meaning today, as I took a very early morning walk - even before the sun was up - and enjoyed the view of the heavens...

Patricia
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3 posted 2003-08-02 05:59 PM


How beautifully your words fall upon the page, bringing serenity...even as I sit here with two bickering children.

Thanks for the peace you brought to me.

Smiling!

Patricia

Martie
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4 posted 2003-08-02 06:20 PM


Beautiful, and spiritually uplifting.
Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
5 posted 2003-08-02 06:22 PM


Margherita - now if this is what it's like, I'm ready...

BC

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2003-08-02 06:40 PM


Margherita
A lovely, lovely write.

SimplyGold
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7 posted 2003-08-02 07:19 PM


Margherita,

This is like crystal, like water
a blissful moment of clarity
Enjoyed!

SG

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8 posted 2003-08-02 08:16 PM


Margherita~
This is breathtakingly beautiful~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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Kethry
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9 posted 2003-08-02 08:56 PM


It doesn't happen very often but when it does the stars explode. How well you've captured the feeling in this.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
10 posted 2003-08-02 09:06 PM


A love poem divine! Absolutely stellar, Margherita! I do so love your poetry!  


Linda


littlewing
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11 posted 2003-08-02 10:07 PM


Margherita,
and in the end . . .
you dance
as always
quite a masterpiece
xxoo

Margherita
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Eternity
12 posted 2003-08-03 03:34 AM


Thank you sweet poet friends for stopping by and for telling me you liked it.
I am going to the beach for a few days, wish you all a wonderful time and see you soon.
May the muse always dance with us!
Love and hugs. Margherita

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
13 posted 2003-08-04 04:51 PM


I find you waiting in the gap.

I like the thought of that.

This was awful pretty Margherita~

scuffedshoe2
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14 posted 2003-08-04 05:16 PM


just a great poem...bottom line!

-ian

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15 posted 2003-08-05 04:06 AM


oooo, very pretty
VOE
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16 posted 2003-08-05 04:58 AM


This is absolutely gorgeous!! Really enjoyed the thoughts here...~V~

I speak from the Voice Of Experience

inkedgoddess
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17 posted 2003-08-05 06:40 AM



We reach the highest peak of Love
becoming One with All there is,
each particle celebrating
in crazy acceleration
the ultimate Touch
of the Divine

where is this man? can u spare him for a bit.....just want to reach it again
and very nice write, marguarite

Ericc
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18 posted 2003-08-05 09:44 AM


Whew...!!
This takes me deep within.
Love,
Eric

NewEnglandlazurlu
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A Mountain Paradise
19 posted 2003-08-05 09:56 AM


I surrender to the call of mystery,
floating in unknown realms,
my soul in quiet expectation,
a blank tape recording
pure waves of Love,
the Source of all Life.


Margherita ~~ Your whole poem is a knock-out, but I especially love the above lines.

Sounds like you have found a special place with a special someone.  

Hugs, Marti

Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts.  A.Einstein

garysgirl
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20 posted 2003-08-05 11:35 AM


Irresistible gravity sucks us
into the darkness of a Black Hole.
Awareness dawns of a revelation
greater than we have ever known.
The Light suddenly explodes,
as pure sparkles we join
the dance of sublime bliss.

All longing is met,
all thirst is stilled,
all desires are fulfilled.

We reach the highest peak of Love
becoming One with All there is,
each particle celebrating
in crazy acceleration
the ultimate Touch
of the Divine.

Now, infinite peace remains,
a gift of our shared ecstasy,
as dancing Light and Love,
vibrating in unison
to the Pulse of Universe,
as One.


WOW!! Margherita, you have captured this special kind of love perfectly....that's just the way it is. Isn't it wonderful? You have to know to be able to write of it so well!!

I'm keeping this, my friend.

Hope you have fun at the beach and that you get very inspired to write of love on the beach, with the waves and skies and sand all around.  
Hugs  
Ethel


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21 posted 2003-09-19 04:50 PM




(kiss on cheek) Oh Margherita, this is sooooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I'm diving for pearls today, looking back on all the pages and finding beautiful poems I missed, and this treasure came up! (smiles) May supernatural and cosmic love always bring music to your soul, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Margherita, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
22 posted 2003-09-20 05:32 PM


Beautiful.
Sandra

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