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SimplyGold
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0 posted 2003-08-02 05:38 PM


Today

And when I wake
  to find the morning sun
another day
   have I to believe
that all there is
  that really counts
are the visions we create
  from one stone to another
movement is our one true fate

When I ask you if you care
  though it be often
Have patience with me
  understand
it's my soul self searching
  looking for another stone
another step worth taking

And in the twilight of the day
  when birds cease their singing
when children lay their heads to rest
  and greater minds are thinking
I take a breath
  slow and deep
my mind focused on the prize
  another chance to live and dream in the
world that I've created


© Copyright 2003 SimplyGold - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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1 posted 2003-08-02 05:48 PM


I love your awareness of co-creating your life.
You care and you trust, it could be enough.
Enjoyed your write.
Love, Margherita

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2003-08-02 05:50 PM


Fantastic...James
Earth Angel
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3 posted 2003-08-02 09:21 PM


I have actually gotten to read a poem by the Golden One! It has been AGES!

Your loving, caring self came shining through this piece. You have a deep understanding of your ownself and the life you have been creating. You are able to rise up and get a macrocosmic view of your corner of the world. The power is within you to create and orchestrate the music you would like to hear.


EA

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (08-02-2003 09:27 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2003-08-02 09:29 PM




(smiles) Yay! You go girl! (kiss on cheek) I believe you should always follow your heart and use the advantage that God offers you, create your own art and see how you can make your own little corner seem so comely! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, dearest friend, carpe diem, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Electra, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

Bec
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5 posted 2003-08-02 09:35 PM


Hi SimplyGold...

I really like this. You know how to make your life your own, and that's so important.

Bec

"Now, Harry you must know all about Muggles, tell me, what exactly is the function of a rubber duck?" ~ Arthur Weasley

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19
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Somewhere out there~
6 posted 2003-08-02 09:47 PM


All of my life I have been searching for these words so I could explain why I keep asking....now I can show them to my family and they can see why...thank you for sharing this. Bless you so much.

"When I ask you if you care
  though it be often
Have patience with me
  understand
it's my soul self searching
  looking for another stone
another step worth taking"

For all my life I have looked for these words, because no one understands.

Love,
SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
7 posted 2003-08-02 10:15 PM


SimplyGold - I've always said you were simply gold, and this verse proves it...

BC

SimplyGold
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8 posted 2003-08-03 08:51 PM


Margherita,

Thank you.
SG

SimplyGold
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9 posted 2003-08-03 08:52 PM


JamesM.

Thank you, it's good to be back. I'll be looking for you..

SG

SimplyGold
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10 posted 2003-08-03 08:58 PM


EA,

Thank you for the feedback. It's always so good to read you Birthday girl.

Yes, I've been away and what a wonderful surprise to come back and see the wonderful poetic growth that everyone has made. I've got a lot of catching up to do.

P.S. Was sad to see the note from Magnus. He will be missed.
SG

SimplyGold
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11 posted 2003-08-03 08:59 PM


Noah,

Thank you sweet one. So glad to read your writing again. Loved the reflections from Ireland.


SG

SimplyGold
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12 posted 2003-08-03 09:01 PM


Bec,
Thank you for peeking in. I'll be looking for you too!

SheraRose,
You'd be surpised how many do! Just read your latest and enjoyed very much. You are a sensitive writer. I'll be looking for more.

SG

SimplyGold
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since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453

13 posted 2003-08-03 09:03 PM


Bill,

Thank you. Bet you didn't know it but, you are a mentor to me.

SG

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