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A Miracle In Life............my 2nd attempt at a Triolet
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A Miracle In Life............my 2nd attempt at a Triolet |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA 
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 There is a miracle called love we know Where two hearts into one heart are blended Always, we affection and care do show There is a miracle called love we know Like fire, love makes the two of us aglow As if to Heaven we have ascended There is a miracle called love we know Where two hearts into one heart are blended [This message has been edited by garysgirl (08-04-2003 04:06 AM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I don't know this poetic form, but what I do know is that this sounds great to my ear! So lovely, dear Ethel, yes you know about love! Hugs. Margherita  |
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Poe_Pot_Pie Member
since 2003-06-01
Posts 107Canada |
Beautiful! A very enchanting poem. Nicely worded. Good job! |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
WOW ... great write here, dear lady, and the perfect picture to go with it, too. Impressive. |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
This is a very fine write and I, too, love the pix. (I had to look triolet up at merriam-webster.com, but glad I did!) KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
yes, almost song like, and its a miracle isnt it |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Ethel, I'm so happy to continue to see your gorgeous love poems being back from Ireland, you know how they always make me smile and cry in joy! (kiss on cheek) You've just got to get Gary here so we can read his beautiful poetry too, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
that was an exelent triotet good job E  insanity is not a crime |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Very pretty...lovely pic, too... This made me think of the kissing smiley face to add. SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Excellent Ethel! I am so proud of you, I love thr triolet. Your resounding lines are good and the message is clear Sometimes this form is so restricting you have done beautifully . . . Look to study the forms of Thee, doth, thou, thy . . . etc etc *smiling* xxoo |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh yes.....this is perfect, and writing of love is something that just spills out of your wonderful pen, I think!!! ~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Margherita, I'm so glad that you liked it. . Poe, thank you!! . Janette, thanks! . Kayjay, here's a link where some different forms of poetry are... http://www.shadowpoetry.com/resources/wip/types.html Thanks for reading. . . I really appreciate all of you. Hugs  Ethel |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Michele, oh yes, it sure is a miracle. . Noah, I'm so glad to see you back from vacation! Thank you for your sweet words. . Liz, thank you, little friend. . . I appreciate all of you. Hugs Ethel |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Shara, thanks!! I love those smilies, too. . Sue, I sure do thank ya'll for teaching me all these different forms. It's fun to try to learn them. . Sunnyone, thank you!! That's sweet of you to say that. . . I appreciate ya'll. Hugs Ethel |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Two hearts in one are blended.... sigh....  here's to you and Gary. you little cutie pies.  You're good at exploring all these styles of poetry arent you E.M? yep, i think you are! lots o love gem xxxxx Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Gemma, for reading my mushy poems right now. I know it must hurt sometimes. I really wish that things were different with you, sweet Gemma.  I really do appreciate you, my sweet friend. Hugs and love Ethel |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Ethel Mae, as much as it may hurt, nothing could stop me reading and loving your poems of love. They keep me alive! More than you know. So, thank YOU for always being here with kind words and friendship for me, and poetry to remind me that love is real..somewhere out there. love ya. Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Ethel I have no doubt you succeeded in your triolet. Beautiful!! Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Gemma, I really do appreciate you, my little friend. I can always depend on you to read my poetry and to leave encouraging words for me. Thank you, Gemmagirl. . . Sue, you are very sweet. Thank you. I apprecite that. . . Hugs to you both Ethel |
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