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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-08-02 10:20 AM



Diverted

The distraction was easy,
entertained by attention,
amused by the turn of a word.
But I am pivotal
and am turning away.

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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MARK V SHELDON
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In a corporeal internship...
1 posted 2003-08-02 11:26 AM


Potent and portent
Important not impotent

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2003-08-02 12:20 PM


thank you Mark

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Poe_Pot_Pie
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Canada
3 posted 2003-08-02 01:22 PM


Very intesting. Nice piece for the new Forum!
Janette
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4 posted 2003-08-02 06:06 PM


"entertained by attention,
amused by the turn of a word."

Well, at least it was entertaining and that counts for something doesn't it?  I think so.

As stated by others, interesting write here, dear Lady ... hang in there.

Margherita
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Eternity
5 posted 2003-08-02 06:09 PM


You must have your reasons!
You describe very efficiently the risk of being diverted.
Love, Margherita

Jason Lyle
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With my darkling
6 posted 2003-08-02 06:12 PM


On the turning away...from the pain and damn troubles...my favorite song.great poem.

Jason

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
7 posted 2003-08-02 11:08 PM


I am pivotal?
Damn straight Maureen!!!

Love your nakdthoughts!!

Ratleader
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8 posted 2003-08-05 12:08 PM


Both halves of this so utterly true! A lot said in just a few words.

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passing shadows
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displaced
9 posted 2003-08-05 03:12 AM


turning away feels real good sometimes
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