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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2003-08-02 09:51 AM


“WHEN THE BREEZE OF WINDS”
by inkedgoddess & Bill Charles
~~~~
Sparrows sipping sunflowers,
does your heart fly without fear or barriers,
light in flight without a shadow,
right here, not for tomorrow,
can you drink sweetly in this moment,
knowing the rounding harvest will soon own it…

When nectar is sipped of one that’s fair,
and a heart beats and is made gently aware,
moonbeams dance in their afterglow,
for now it is now, not ones that re-flow,
lips will taste wine of pleasures sweet kiss,
and yet the fall will come, but not to dismiss…

Serenaded sunflowers,
do you hear the echo from beginners
upon the earth worn from before,
as time unfolding yields to winters door,
will this love still blossom
when summer birds song is of long ago,
can this harvest reaped now stay as such, aglow…

Songs melody is of the fragrant meadow,
and sounds whisper forth as they flow,
from you, from I, into the now of it all,
time does not move, still quiet in its trance,
but listen to the shades of a loving romance,
for when the breeze of winds blow strong and cold,
warm of tenderness you will own fivefold…
~~~~



© Copyright 2003 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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1 posted 2003-08-02 10:05 AM


Beautiful duet you two!
Hope we see more of your blended pens.
~Summertime Smiles, Nancy~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

Patricia
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2 posted 2003-08-02 10:13 AM


time does not move, still quiet in its trance,
but listen to the shades of a loving romance,
for when the breeze of winds blow strong and cold,
warm of tenderness you will own fivefold…

Goodness...what a duet!  This is an absolutely beautiful verse.  Makes me want to fall in love before winter sets in...so that I have warmth in a season of cold.

Love this, you two!

Patricia

[This message has been edited by Patricia (08-03-2003 10:06 AM).]

nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2003-08-02 10:26 AM


very lovely Bill and Michele...
quite beautiful images too.

*s
M

Sunshine
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4 posted 2003-08-02 10:47 AM


Serenaded sunflowers,
do you hear the echo from beginners
upon the earth worn from before,
as time unfolding yields to winters door,
will this love still blossom
when summer birds song is of long ago,
can this harvest reaped now stay as such, aglow…


And the Passionate Poets Reign!

Ericc
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5 posted 2003-08-02 11:21 AM


Two voices joined beautifuly.
Eric

garysgirl
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6 posted 2003-08-02 11:23 AM


Songs melody is of the fragrant meadow,
and sounds whisper forth as they flow,
from you, from I, into the now of it all,
time does not move, still quiet in its trance,
but listen to the shades of a loving romance,
for when the breeze of winds blow strong and cold,
warm of tenderness you will own fivefold…


What a beautiful love song, Michele and Bill....just beautiful.  

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2003-08-02 02:45 PM


Lovely to read...James
Margherita
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8 posted 2003-08-02 04:47 PM


I love your voices entwined in this song of love.
Very beautifully done.
Love, Margherita

SimplyGold
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9 posted 2003-08-02 05:04 PM


Very fine colabation. Enjoyed! Enjoyed! Enjoyed!

SG

passing shadows
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10 posted 2003-08-02 05:10 PM


that's pretty damn good when you can't tell who wrote what part

nice blend

Janette
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11 posted 2003-08-02 05:38 PM


Two blended beautifully.
Ceinwyn
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12 posted 2003-08-02 06:06 PM


lovely

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inkedgoddess
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13 posted 2003-08-02 08:33 PM


glad you enjoyed, and yes, once again, i was graced by mr. romance himself to let me fly off his coattails
Kethry
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14 posted 2003-08-02 08:38 PM


Very winter warming, the images were superb.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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15 posted 2003-08-02 09:22 PM




(smiles) Yay! I'm so happy to see the both of you collaborating, dearest friends, this is most beautiful and when you hold the promise of love true to your heart, it seems to ward off any shiver or blizzard! (big hugggsssssssss) God Bless You, dearest friends, this is a treasure, we all love you both so much! You have such beautiful hearts, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you both!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

NewEnglandlazurlu
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16 posted 2003-08-02 09:28 PM


You write beautiful music together. Thank you for joining hands and pens.

Hugs, Marti

Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts.  A.Einstein

Earth Angel
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17 posted 2003-08-02 09:31 PM


How could a duet by a troubadour and a goddess be anything less than melodic?...

Warm hugs and smiles to you both!
EA

SharaRose
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18 posted 2003-08-02 09:38 PM


As you know I haven't been here long so I don't know the 2 of you, but are ya'll married, or bf, and gf? Seems so real...like the 2 of you are as one...wow...very nice! is what came to mind when reading this. You don't have to answer that..I am just saying this left me with the feeling of 2 people who are in love. Very loving, and tender, and sweet to the other.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

littlewing
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19 posted 2003-08-02 11:02 PM


Ohh I love this!
A perfect mixture of both . . .
The two of you do write beautifully together
xxoo

Aenimal
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20 posted 2003-08-02 11:28 PM


great write guys
ThisDiamond
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21 posted 2003-08-02 11:39 PM


What a welcome melding of two striking artists. This piece was different than each, and awesome together. Bravo you guys!
TD

inkedgoddess
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22 posted 2003-08-03 07:07 AM


thanks again, and again, it was a pleasure to do this ......
as for Shara's question....do you want to field this one , Bill or should we keep em guessing........lol

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (08-03-2003 07:08 AM).]

Dark Angel
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23 posted 2003-08-03 08:13 AM


Serenaded sunflowers,
do you hear the echo from beginners
upon the earth worn from before,
as time unfolding yields to winters door,
will this love still blossom
when summer birds song is of long ago,
can this harvest reaped now stay as such, aglow…


Beautifully romantic.... you make a great team

Maree.


fate is not just
whose cooking  smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)


inkedgoddess
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24 posted 2003-08-04 06:55 PM


just doing a little breathing.....aaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhh
bklynboy
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florida
25 posted 2003-08-04 07:56 PM


You guys make a poetic music together. Nice job!
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