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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2003-08-02 07:38 AM


Essence of The Day

Upon the soft grasses
in the meadow, me and
my sweetheart lay.
Gazing into the eyes
of each other,
caressing the essence
of the day.
The forest winds
are blowing,
like her they
touch my heart.
In the meadow
grace is flowing,
love is growing
in my heart.

JamesLee
August01
2003

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2003-08-02 08:04 AM



Ah...a touch of innocense...

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2003-08-02 08:13 AM


James,
Very nice, enjoyed.


Enchantress
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3 posted 2003-08-02 08:33 AM


Lovely lovely James!
~Summertime Smiles~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

Bill Charles
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4 posted 2003-08-02 09:28 AM


James - you write of such touching hearts. I would love to visit this meadow, perhaps she has a sister?

BC

Margherita
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5 posted 2003-08-02 04:20 PM


Ah James I love your enchanted meadow!
Love, Margherita

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2003-08-02 05:16 PM


Thank you Sunshine, Seymour, Enchantres, Bill and Margherita for the nice responses...glad you enjoyed the meadow as I do...James
Janette
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7 posted 2003-08-02 05:58 PM


Ahhhhhhhhh ... I adore the tenderness in this one.
Patricia
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8 posted 2003-08-02 06:07 PM


A beautiful image, James.  So enjoyed!

Patricia

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9 posted 2003-08-04 12:03 PM


How i missed this, i do not know..keeping this...gives me good memories.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

SharaRose
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10 posted 2003-08-04 12:15 PM


I got a picture of someone reciting this to their sweetheart...What a sweet thing this is!!! Makes you wanna run hug someone, and squeeze 'em reallllll tight.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

LeeJ
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11 posted 2003-08-04 12:25 PM


how pretty this was...
Mistletoe Angel
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12 posted 2003-09-20 03:50 PM






(smiles) Awwwwwwwwww...the meadow is such a beautiful and soft place to rest, stare up at the sky, and see messages of love written in the clouds and stars! (big hugggssssss) This is precious, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Jason Lyle
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13 posted 2003-09-20 04:19 PM


A beautiful write, James.

Jason

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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14 posted 2003-09-21 03:16 AM


wonderful write James as always!
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