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Flying to the Ground
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Flying to the Ground |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Flying to the Ground A tinseled sky has caught my eye Clouds of color usurp the sky And I have fixed some wings my back To climb above the things I lack I’ll climb and paint my wings up there In all the hews of daring dare Fly down into and Eden’s den And figure out the why and when And then I’ll fly my love away Beyond forever and a day And read to her my rhymes divine To sweep her up my sands of time And we will glean the fields of green And dance and laugh upon the scene Build our castles on the shore And mortar them with evermore And ne’er a wave will bring them down For they are built of true earth brown. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Good Morning Sy! Didn't take you long to find the newest forum!   |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Morning Sy! Nothing quite likde waking up to find this beauty your first in Open 28! Teas on...Chai today..I'll pour. ~Morning hugs, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
And then I’ll fly my love away Beyond forever and a day And read to her my rhymes divine To sweep her up my sands of time And we will glean the fields of green And dance and laugh upon the scene Build our castles on the shore And mortar them with evermore ================================= *sigh* *sigh* *SIGH* *SIGH* *SIGH* *SY*   rhymes divine is right!!!! *winkiewinkie*   "How could I stand here with you and not be moved by you." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, My pleasure and thank you dear. JamesMichael, Thank you James. Sunshine, I follow the sun. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
As refreshing as a morning swim... Thank you. -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Do you have your wings on? Never mind I'll carry you. WWRS :lovaya: |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MARK, Need a towel? Thank you my friend. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I'll need no wings to fly ... not when your rhymes make me high. *L* & one for Randy |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Seymour - oh yes, a great read this fine morning. A pleace perhaps I could visit... BC |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Mr. T.! May Forum 81 be full of your wonderful poems such as this fine one!  EA |
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Amature2 Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 416 |
"And ne’er a wave will bring them down For they are built of true earth brown." Nice write, perfect ending. |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Beautiful Seymour. I was wandering around looking for you....so I am abit late. Aren't I always? hee hee. No matter....cinnamon rolls are ready! hugs, Chris  "The suspense is terrible. I hope it will last!" -Gene Wilder as Willy Wonka [This message has been edited by Nightshade (08-02-2003 09:33 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bill, Of course we have a special visitors day. LOL Earth Angel I will surely do my best. Amature2 Thank you for the kind words. Chris, I've gained 6lbs with all the goodies you've been feeding me. LOL |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
I love this. What a grand "uplift" for me this morning. Just perfect! Patricia |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Sy, m'friend And you said you'd write like me...I'll take the compliment, for compliment it is. But, please don't. It'd be a giant step backwards. Ed |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
wranx I always walk one step forward and two steps backward. The solution is to walk backwards. LOL Thanks for the reply. Pat, You are sweet. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Seymour, when you dream you reach magical heights, even if you play on the ground. Flights of love to enjoy deeply. Love, Margherita |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Margherita A sweet reply, thank you. |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
"And read to her my rhymes divine To sweep her up my sands of time" Ohhhhhh to be read to in this way ... especially from your very own penned words ... heavenly. Lucky Lady. Enjoyed |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Janette Thank you for the beautiful comment. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy In the land behind your eyes you make forever after sighs.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
No wonder there are rainbows in the sky when you fly past. *Grin Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
"I’ll climb and paint my wings up there In all the hews of daring dare Fly down into and Eden’s den And figure out the why and when And then I’ll fly my love away Beyond forever and a day And read to her my rhymes divine To sweep her up my sands of time And we will glean the fields of green And dance and laugh upon the scene Build our castles on the shore And mortar them with evermore" __________________________________ Big FRIEKEN' SIGHS, SY! This has got to be the most beautiful write I've seen from you...it's definately a keeper and you deserve a Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Swept me away in reading this....what a lovely thing to take in. Lifted this reader for sure. "Build our castles on the shore And mortar them with evermore" What woman doesn't love to hear these words that make her feel secure! Very nice, and sincere.  SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Such a feeling of joy...I liked this one very much. TD |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
And then I’ll fly my love away Beyond forever and a day And read to her my rhymes divine To sweep her up my sands of time So, so beautiful, my friend.... Sorry I'm so late reading you today. Hugs to you, Seymour  Ethel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Melissa, Thank you sweet, I enjoyed the SharaRose A lovely reply, thank you. ThisDiamond Thank you my dear. Ethel You never fail me. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
"And then I’ll fly my love away Beyond forever and a day And read to her my rhymes divine To sweep her up my sands of time And we will glean the fields of green And dance and laugh upon the scene Build our castles on the shore And mortar them with evermore" Sy...I may be late to this one, but that doesn't mean that I love it any less. Absolutely beautiful, my friend. "My friends are my estate." |
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