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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa 
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Those little blue flowers will crumble it away, given enough time... Hmmmm... |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Woah... good stuff  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
whoa...wondering if I had too much to drink now... |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Smiling at you..  You truly are beautiful...ya know that? This is amazing...written as only you can, and in your own unique style. Love it, Brian..  "My friends are my estate." ~Emily Dickinson [This message has been edited by vlraynes (08-02-2003 02:35 AM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
 'Cause...you made me smile!  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
brian, Reminds me of an abstract painting I once did. Enjoyed |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
hey, this blue me away! love it Brian. Maree |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
brian - I can see them as I read this... BC |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Love your mind. Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I love the way you do this...  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Quite a deed ... Enjoyed the motion! Love, Margherita |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
piece by piece Bri . . . just as you have written xxoo |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
That's very sweet. You know the color of her eyes. Sometimes they say... do you even know what color my eyes are? It's sweet that you do. Very cute write.  SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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Riley
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
quote: nice visual! loved the whole thing riley * the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes * |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
You're something else bri something else |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Yes, Raph. He certainly is. (Bri? sneak attack: ) |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
like the way you arranged your words! neat style... ~ARH |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
 ...just because I love this one so much."My friends are my estate." |
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