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ctowen
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since 2001-10-18
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Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2003-08-02 12:32 PM


I awake
by flicker of candle light
my sleep-filled eyes
unable to clearly see

With my first breath
I cry out in the night
"... where is this place"
I find myself to be

I grow
by the flicker of candle light
burning softly ...
touching, warming
I play

Feeding upon the shadows
of the night, yearning
searching the stars
to find my way

I live
by the flicker of candle light
sometimes captivated
by its romance

Embodied within
its eternal sight
blinding me
of its dying
circumstance

For this
I must prepare,
the coming dawn

In a flicker
of candle light ...

... I'm gone

Fear is a blindness, heart is the cure.   -   C. Belville 02

© Copyright 2003 C. Thomas Owen - All Rights Reserved
Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
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1 posted 2003-08-02 10:43 AM


Powerful words.
Eric

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2003-08-03 02:40 AM


Craig, you okay?
cusick
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since 2003-07-27
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3 posted 2003-08-05 04:43 AM


Your first stanza is very much like a poem that I wrote but there is where the likeness ends. Marvelous. Maggie
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