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Tiersdin
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0 posted 2003-08-01 07:16 PM



You whizzed by in
souped up coup
Tee shirt, mirrored sunglasses-
Sun glinting off your raven locks
You caught my eye
Just before you blurred by-
Inviting lips curved in
The most provocative smirk
& Just like that, gone
Leaving me guessing
after images...


~Tier

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1 posted 2003-08-01 07:26 PM


HiThereSisterOfTheHeart~
You wrote this one perfectly~
I can SEE him !!!

Love the title~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2003-08-01 07:57 PM


---Darnation! Those missed Kodak opportunities!

Hold that thought! lol


EA

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Tiersdin
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3 posted 2003-08-01 11:12 PM


Thanks Margie! *big hugs & one sloppy ol' kiss on the cheek*

And EA!  *headlock, nuggies, and all of the above!

Thanks for reading and enjoying!

*smiles*

~Tier

wranx
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Moved from a shack to a barn
4 posted 2003-08-02 02:48 AM


Nice little snapshot for sure!

Happy to see ya here again.

Ed...

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