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vandana
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0 posted 2003-08-01 05:43 PM



I feel so empty
Inside
I feel so empty
Hope that someone can come
To fill my heart with love
I feel so lonely
I don't have anyone to live
I don't have anyone to give
I feel empty
And want someone to love me
I want someone to hold me
Someone had told me
That anyone would fall for me
But I feel empty inside
Wishing anyone would love me
Wishing hope someone would come
And fill my heart
I feel my heart empty
Hope you would come
And hold my hand
Take me with me
Fill my heart with love
Empty

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2003-08-01 06:44 PM


Sigh, dear vandana, this is a sad song. But I am sure your deep longing will be answered, you express it so powerfully!
Love, Margherita

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178

2 posted 2003-08-02 10:49 AM


It is in the emptiness that love is found. The beauty of your words spring from the essence of "nothing".
In Zen they say...it is the space between the bars...that holds the tiger.

There is more beauty calling for you.
Listen.
And keep writing your beautiful words.
Love,
Eric

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~
3 posted 2003-08-02 10:52 AM


Your plea, and heart cry will be answered when you least expect it. When you aren't looking....

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2003-08-02 02:53 PM


May the sweet blessings of love saturate your heart...James
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