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Snowflake From Hell
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since 2003-07-10
Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

0 posted 2003-08-01 03:37 PM


Lookin' at the world through tired eyes,
Can't change no matter how hard someone tries.
Feels so bad,
All so sad.
This wasted life you can't obtain,
And I can no longer maintain.
It feels so bad,
And it's so sad.
Trying to get myself back on track,
Wish you would just get off my back.
Feels so bad,
All so sad.
Staying up keeping myself awake,
Waiting to the next mistake I make.
If it feels so bad,
Is it really so sad?
Sick of all the corruption,
It's nothing more than a disruption.
Feels so bad,
All so very sad....

I feel rain pouring down. I wait to rot away,
Live again, here forever, the spiral never ends.   Godsmack

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Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
1 posted 2003-08-01 03:59 PM


Hey I must have missed you before...Welcome!

Nice piece.

Susan C.

Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion
2 posted 2003-08-01 05:39 PM


thank you

I feel rain pouring down. I wait to rot away,
Live again, here forever, the spiral never ends.   Godsmack

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