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A Simple Taboo
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A Simple Taboo |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now 
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A Simple Taboo she sees his image through her compact mirror he openly stares in an aloof manner she continues on without acknowledgement her hand is steady moving with precise strokes up over around a deep red trail fills the heart shaped contours of her small luscious mouth finishing her task she tosses her blonde hair long curls freely fly increasing the volume it comes floating down into a messy mass the final results gives her lovely features a wild gypsy look closing the compact she stands and turns around flashing him a smile spellbound he watches as she begins to walk towards where he sits he cannot stop himself as he quickly stands in anticipation but all he can do is mouth as she walks by "you look so pretty" she whispers in reply "thank you very much" without ever stopping naughty satisfaction descends over her as she walks out the door a simple taboo flirting with a stranger with her husband near by Janette |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
I enjoyed this.Janette you are great at these.  angelblueyes |
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eminor_angel Member
since 2003-05-22
Posts 323Canada |
lovely title, it made me stop and really want to read your poem great write. |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
This is true to life.A very apt title. Enjoyed the read. Maggie |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Made me smile this. If you watch closely you can see this happen daily. I really liked this. |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
angelblueyes - I am not much of a poet, I admit, just a story teller at heart. Thank you for your reply and again thanks for responding to my post this morning that got dumped ... sheeesh ... but then I feared that it would ... now it is good and buried ... oh well. eminor_angel - I confess ... the title was done purposely ... Hhahahahah! ... yet I do feel that it foretells of this piece. Thank you for stopping by and taking the time to leave me this comment. cusick - I agree this is the kind of thing that soars a woman's spirit *wink* ... thank for the read. James - thank you for commenting and to just let you know one of mine got kicked out today, too ... ouch ... so it goes. Munda - yes, it is fun to people watch, especially when it is a lively scene and you have no idea how it will end. Hahaha! Thank you for your response. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
simple taboo flirting with a stranger with her husband near by loved your story, oh a slice of life, it is and how it starts with an innocent flirt, only to escalate sometimes.........enjoyed this and can more than relate |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
inkedgoddess - it happened while I was in New Orleans ... Hahahahah! Big fun there, definitely the place to ... flirt. Thanks so much for taking the time to reply. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! I can relate! |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
passing shadows - I do not doubt for one moment that you can relate ... pretty Lady. Psssst, it sure is fun isn't it? Hahhahaha! |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Janette... you say you are no poet... just a story teller... ah, Dear Lady... It is not what you say but how you say it... and the way you tell it... is Sheer poetry!! MoonShadow . |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
MoonShadow, Thank you! always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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