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SEA
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with you

0 posted 2003-08-01 10:51 AM







His touch, thundering
electric fingertip dance
holding, heart and soul

~*~

His summer storm rains
drenching me in emotion
soothing, heart and soul

~*~

His love, comforting
enveloping me in bliss
he, my heart and soul

~*~

~SEA~

[This message has been edited by SEA (08-01-2003 10:52 AM).]

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2003-08-01 10:52 AM



His love, in your heart
where majesty meets music
some song lingers on

Jordyn05
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2 posted 2003-08-01 10:55 AM


Super poem. I liked the picture of rain.

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2003-08-01 11:22 AM


A poem of heart and soul, written by one with a heart and soul, for someone who has heart and soul. This poem touched my heart and soul!

--and that photo was perfect for the mini meditation I just did while gazing upon it...


EA

El_Campeador
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4 posted 2003-08-01 11:22 AM


Excellent!

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

[This message has been edited by El_Campeador (08-01-2003 11:22 AM).]

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2003-08-01 11:30 AM


SEA
Well done, enjoyed the read.

LeeJ
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6 posted 2003-08-01 11:33 AM


simply beautiful a wealth of words from your heart to his...god bless
Enchantress
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7 posted 2003-08-01 11:38 AM


Beautiful Susan...God I love the way you write!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

angelblueyes
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8 posted 2003-08-01 11:42 AM


SO beautiful.
angelblueyes

Aimster
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9 posted 2003-08-01 12:00 PM


so beautiful girlie! such vivid amazing
imagery in this...you rock!

take care
amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

Janet Marie
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10 posted 2003-08-01 02:14 PM


now theres three reasons to cook him meatloaf

cool collection of Haikus poetess girlie.

"How could I stand here with you and not be moved by you."

LH

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11 posted 2003-08-01 03:45 PM



These are lovely, Susan.
I do love when you pop in here and share
some of your poetry with us.
Hugs to you, friend,
~Vicky

"My friends are my estate."
~Emily Dickinson

JamesMichael
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12 posted 2003-08-01 04:15 PM


So very nice...James
vandana
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13 posted 2003-08-01 05:35 PM


liked this
Patricia
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14 posted 2003-08-01 06:00 PM


Sigh...this is lovely...and my timing of this read couldn't be better...it is "fixin'" to storm here.

Just beautiful.

Patricia

Bill Charles
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15 posted 2003-08-01 07:33 PM


SEA - lovely, you grace the blue pages with your words...

BC

Ericc
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16 posted 2003-08-02 10:46 AM


Beautiful.
Eric

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