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Open Poetry #27

fern Hair Sounds of Sea

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

0 posted 2003-08-01 09:07 AM

Fern hair sounds of sea, as a flute
Waiting for me in the other room
Polleny magnetic embers living
Eye lashes of heathery fluorescence
Great murmuring fountains of ocean and azure sky
With graceful vitality akin to
A messenger of blessed rain coloring my mind
Bringing me home to live in the warmth inside me
Bewitching decisive circles of virgin canvassing
Painting inner flesh of oceanic cloth
Dropping shadows in a drying breeze
Of all I knew and was taught
Soaking softness like a haunting migratory afterthought
Destined for eternity
Sways the vast art of wind
In a vessel of
Exotic curves with an arched brow
Of soul
Filling like a lover’s sweet kimono
Wrapped around the waist of life itself
A holistic technique directly assessed
By the vanishing point of every word
Networked by internal verse
Poetically innovative, a sense of recognition
Embodied within ideas and manifestations
Energy clear, joyous and narrative
Visual manifestations entrusted and on loan
A marriage with spiritual culture
Bastions of transformations
The rising tides of focus perceived, shared and known
Fern hair sounds of sea as a flute
Incarnate and unlimited

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2003-08-01 09:32 AM

"Great murmuring fountains of ocean and azure sky
With graceful vitality akin to
A messenger of blessed rain coloring my mind
Bringing me home to live in the warmth inside me
Bewitching decisive circles of virgin canvassing
Painting inner flesh of oceanic cloth
Dropping shadows in a drying breeze
Of all I knew and was taught
Soaking softness like a haunting migratory afterthought
Destined for eternity"

you absolutely blow me away!!! You really leave me not knowing what to say, but when I read your poetry, it fills my mind so completely that it flows through me....I just love the way you write

*another for my library

[This message has been edited by SEA (08-01-2003 09:33 AM).]

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2003-08-01 09:38 AM

Lee,
Fern hair sounds of sea as a flute
Incarnate and unlimited
You have a multitude of poems in this one.
Excellent

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