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My Heart
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My Heart |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Sometime's it seems as if there's nowhere I can go From the pain inside me that seems to overflow Darkness that surrounds my heart Chipping away at each little part The pain that surrounds it seems so real The sadness is too much, that I feel My heart trying to break through this wall of despair Trying as hard as it can to make the repairs Feel's like I've been locked up and thrown away the key How do I get this turmoil out of me Like a thief in the night Shaking completly with so much fright My tears falling endlessly Crying and crying inside of me Take that knife and cut my heart in two That would be so much easier to do My pillow is now soaked with tears Of pains come and gone over the years I know somehow I'll finally break free And then my heart can deeply breathe Chipping away the darkness and fright Taking back it's beating life Filling it with the brightness of light Giving it back eternal life angelblueyes |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
May I offer you a new one...? "  "-MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
You will. You'll break free, and when you do you will have all kinds of love there waiting. Sending a  SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
MVS:You're so sweet Thanks for the comfort.angelblueyes |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
SharaRose;Thanks so much.After 30 years I'm so ready for it.A back to you my friend.angelblueyes |
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x8x_bigmike Member
since 2003-07-08
Posts 130California, USA |
The sadness is too much, that I feel My heart trying to break through this wall of despair _______ This set of verse differs from the first parts, and I really like the way it flows, non conventionally. Mike _____________________________ |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Mike:Thanks so much for your support angelblueyes |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
i think everyones had those nights...i know i have Another dream that will never come true just to compliment your sorrow.....Disturbed |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Snowflake From Hell:I hear ya, my thoughts and prayers are with all who experience this. angelblueyes |
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