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Bec
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0 posted 2003-08-01 12:47 PM


Shut up!

Some people have to search
They look high, they look low.
But I don’t have that problem,
The darn thing just won’t go!

I know it’s tough
When you lose your muse.
But will someone shut mine up,
Before I blow a fuse?

So many times we lose inspiration,
And then it comes with a bang.
The only problem is I never know
When it will come again.

Now I suffer sleepless nights
With this muse of mine.
Will someone please teach it
How to tell the time?

I don’t mind if it’s breakfast,
I don’t mind if it’s noon.
But, my muse, all these late nights
Are going to kill me soon!

Gemjop mentioned that her muse is working overtime, and my muse has been doing absolutely nothing for ages, until I saw "I know it's tough when you lose your muse, but will somebody shut mine up?" which prodded her into doing some work! Thanks, Gem!
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"Now, Harry you must know all about Muggles, tell me, what exactly is the function of a rubber duck?" ~ Arthur Weasley

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-08-01 12:49 PM


cute write...I can relate
angelblueyes
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2 posted 2003-08-01 12:55 PM


nice write.I hear you on this.
angelblueyes

x8x_bigmike
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3 posted 2003-08-01 01:08 AM


I know it’s tough
When you lose your muse.
But will someone shut mine up,
Before I blow a fuse?
________________
the grass is always greener...

Mike

Snowflake From Hell
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4 posted 2003-08-01 01:17 AM


nice write

Another dream that will never come true just to compliment your sorrow.....Disturbed

Bec
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5 posted 2003-08-01 01:38 AM


passing shadows... Unfortunately I've never actually had this problem! But now that I've said that...

angelblueyes... I hope my muse doesn't start waking me up, I need all the sleep I can get!

x8x_bigmike... I don't think I'd mind too much if my muse did a little more work, but not in the middle of the night.

Snowflake from Hell... Thanks for reading. By the way, I love your name!

Bec

"Now, Harry you must know all about Muggles, tell me, what exactly is the function of a rubber duck?" ~ Arthur Weasley

Dee
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6 posted 2003-08-08 06:59 AM


Bec, cool write. I had to smile cause I know the feeling sometimes. But at the moment my muse isn't very noisy.
Love ya hun,
Mum xo

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7 posted 2003-08-12 07:05 PM


I wish mine would shut up too, sometimes..
he isn't very good.

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