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Open Poetry #27
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LastMoments
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0 posted 2003-07-31 11:34 PM


You unlocked my chains
You rid me of remorse
Take my heart under your wings
And comfort it with everything
Because with you I feel
No longer trapped beneathe
All the mind games i've played
That seemed to make me who i am
Redefine the happiness
Show inside the real me

Take the sky and make it yours
I see your eyes in the shine
Be the angel in the wind
So the clouds can give reminder
That you are just breaths away
And lead my eyes away from me
To the fields of destiny
Where they can lie inside of you
And lie inside forever yours

Make the future memories
For me to gaze upon
Recognize the normal times
To see how special you've become
Inside me beats in pure lavish
I'm reaching for a touch
Just enough of your heart
To say I'm one again
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angelblueyes
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1 posted 2003-07-31 11:37 PM

This was absolutely beautiful and romantic.To fell this oneness with someone is an amazing feeling.I hope this person is worthy of your love.
angelblueyes
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2 posted 2003-08-01 05:25 AM

beautiful
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with you
3 posted 2003-08-01 09:39 AM

oh this made such big sighs! I was trying to pick out a favorite line, but everything goes together so perfectly, I liked them all!
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4 posted 2003-08-01 09:43 AM

This is such a beautiful love poem. This
hopeless romantic absolutely loves it!
Hugs
Ethel
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