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Angels |
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Jordyn05 Member
since 2003-07-17
Posts 62 |
This poem is for my friend Jimmy who is autisic. He is a real angel. Angels are found over everyone's shoulder They follow us each step as we grow older Angels roam everywhere and guide us all Catching us with open arms when we fall Angels are always there with a helping hand They are there when no one else can understand Angels never fail, never let anyone down Putting a smile on our face when we frown Angels are the support when we are weak They know how to wipe the tears off our cheek Angels are our friends when we are alone Caring for us when no love is shown Angels aren't always as unseen as we believe They are not as impossible as we perceive Angels can be found in friends or even a stranger Keeping us from all wrong and all danger Angels are amongst the people that walk around They are not invisible, they can be found Angels are people we love, the one's that care Believing in us when we think we can't bear |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
this is very special... |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
...and Welcome to Passions!!! Nice debut! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! I very much enjoyed your first post! I'll be looking forward to seeing more of your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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Jordyn05 Member
since 2003-07-17
Posts 62 |
Thnka for those kind warm words of welcome. I will try to post as often as I can. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Yes, welcome  I am sure you will make a wonderfull edition to our family, stick around  .that is truely a sweet poem. insanity is not a crime |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very nice Jordy! Welcome to Passions! Enjoy yourself here. remember - Some have entertained angels without even knowing. hugs, Chris |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Jordyn Welcome to PIP! I adore angels . . . and you are such a sweet soul to write this You certainly will make a fine addition to our family Please check your email for a greeting from everyone here at Passions xxoo |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Jordyn, this was beautiful and a wonderful first post.I love angels and believe that we all have them.A great tribute.Welcome to Passions. angelblueyes  |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Gods little messengers. There to protect us all. Loved reading this. It's so true!!  SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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Bec Member
since 2001-02-23
Posts 475Canberra |
Hi Jordyn... I love this... "Catching us with open arms when we fall" There's no need to be afraid when we have angels around. And Jimmy has nothing to fear with an angel like you for a friend! Welcome to Passions. Bec "Now, Harry you must know all about Muggles, tell me, what exactly is the function of a rubber duck?" ~ Arthur Weasley |
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x8x_bigmike Member
since 2003-07-08
Posts 130California, USA |
i can empathize, my uncle is a diabetic with some learning dissabilities...life seems so pure in his eyes...a great read Mike |
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Jordyn05 Member
since 2003-07-17
Posts 62 |
Thank you all for responding to my poem and leaving very warm words of thanks for writting the poem. I have wriiten more poems so be sure to check them out as well. Jordyn [This message has been edited by Jordyn05 (08-01-2003 11:01 AM).] |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Jordyn, Ahhhh...I know what you mean...my nephew...and what a sweet, loving wonderful boy he is! Thank you for this piece, I am sending it to my sister! Susan C. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writiing...James |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This kind and understanding poem illustrates your loving spirit! Welcome to your new Passionsate family! Warm welcoming hugs, Earth Angel |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Welcome! and what a lovely entrance you made..I'm with littlewing I adore angels as well...Much Enjoyed!! If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Jordyn05 Member
since 2003-07-17
Posts 62 |
Thank you all who have enjoyed the poem. As a teen writer I would like to relize my dream of beening published in a book. Thanks to those people who see the angelic spirit in me and in Jimmy. Agian I am thinking you all for taking the time to response to this wonderful poem. Million thanks. Jordyn  |
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