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Antithesis (for the "A" challenge)
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Antithesis (for the "A" challenge) |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri 
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For the "A” Challenge Antithesis Behold my antithesis, nemesis, destructor and controller of my dreams For he is nothing that I want Yet everything I need A painful contradiction Welcomed in my heart A discrepancy that tears my mind and soul apart A victim of inconsistency, I’m lost in love with him Behold my antithesis, he fulfills my ev’ry whim [This message has been edited by Patricia (07-31-2003 09:13 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Absolutely the best! You met and conquered this challenge so very well Patricia!! Extremely well written. ~Smiling at YOU!~  ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very nice,,,  |
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x8x_bigmike Member
since 2003-07-08
Posts 130California, USA |
the obvious question I would have, is if you believe in the fact of your nemesis, and your in its control, your identification of that control lets the reader know you recognize that. So is nemesis denial, or is there a dual meaning in its definition. Just a thought, and a question I couldnt answer. Mike |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Patricia, I love you reading you.A talented and challenge well met my friend. angelblueyes |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow...learn new stuff every day thanks for the write |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
i know this one....... i keep him around, who else is going to change the lightbulbs? |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Thanks for your responses to this poem. BigMike, Thanks for your question(s). I am doing a bit of analysis of the situation and myself today... This poem was a snapshot of my emotions and feelings in one moment. The poem just flowed from me without intense introspection. It just felt good to release the words. But a big thanks to you! Your questions make think...a very good thing, my friend. Patricia |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
You did a good job taking a word and running with it... “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Patricia, a challenge well met. Very good writing, my friend.  Hug  Ethel |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Good lord, I need to break out the dictionary! This was great!! Susan C. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Patricia, this is extremely well done! It's surprising what these challenges bring forth from us isn't it? hugs, Chris |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Great write! Eric |
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