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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-07-31 06:01 PM



My Abbreviate

I never could abbreviate my feelings held for you.
How could I list them less than many, on this page of blue?
How can one dare to shorten what those letters four could mean?
I can only lengthen them, the more of you that's seen.

It started back, how long ago? in Apr. I believe.
Or maybe it was really in Oct. on an eve.
We met in short, the time I mean, too short it was for me.
I never could abbreviate my feelings timed of we.

I could go on forever as the years have seemed to do.
Instead I will just shorten this one poem post for you.
I'm sure you know that temperment curtails at time my moods.
And so you'll find this shortened verse "My Abbreviate" concludes.

M


"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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bslicker
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state of mind
1 posted 2003-07-31 06:05 PM


You Abbreviate'd well
good write M

bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
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Wind
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2 posted 2003-07-31 06:25 PM


sometimes things are better cut short

insanity is not a crime

Sunshine
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3 posted 2003-07-31 08:20 PM



Good job!

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2003-07-31 08:25 PM


Well done!!  Challenge met!
Much enjoyed!
~Hugs~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

El_Campeador
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5 posted 2003-08-01 08:11 AM


Excellent job! I loved this...

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

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