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Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa

0 posted 2003-07-31 04:48 PM


Love suffers not the unkind in disguise
or flowers from roots shallow, unwise,
nor demeans itself on pillars to lean
unaligned and cracked in disbelief, fear.

Love opens not to the weight of ego
or willfully crashes through intolerant stone
nor burns to ash in flames of denial
harboured and spread by human design.

Love asks not for a season, a time,
or a reason to live in dreams of the night
nor holds out a hand week, fragile, and cold,
unable to hold the essence of soul.

Love, dear love, no, please don’t awake
too far from home you’re branded a fake
relax at ease, breathe in and exhale,
I’m weighing your worth on a time scale.

How long will you live, how soon will you die,
in between do you try us all on for size,
soar like a bird in sky of good words
or land with a thump somewhere in the world?

That’s it; I’m done, I can’t question love!  

Helen

© Copyright 2003 Helen - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2003-07-31 05:02 PM



me either, Helen

M

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2003-07-31 05:05 PM


Nor demand...James
Martie
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3 posted 2003-07-31 10:09 PM


Honeybunch

Thoughtful and provocative...as always.  

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