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bslicker
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state of mind

0 posted 2003-07-31 01:34 PM



History ~ Present
.
.
.
The other day
face to face
realizing that it was fate
eye to eye
seeing the beauty

me allowing to let it go
into a different direction
from the life that was planned
still wanting to bring it back

but history tells me
it will never be the same
not wanting same to be
hoping, wondering if
once together again

to live the present
not forgetting the past
writing a new history
to make it last.


bernie
  




A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker


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passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-07-31 01:41 PM


good write Bernie...write on write on
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2 posted 2003-07-31 01:45 PM


Writing a new history can be exciting and gratifying--may this be true for you!


EA

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3 posted 2003-07-31 01:45 PM


very much enjoyed...thank you for writing and sharing.
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4 posted 2003-07-31 01:53 PM


but history tells me
it will never be the same
not wanting same to be
hoping, wondering if
once together again

to live the present
not forgetting the past
writing a new history
to make it last.


Hi Bernie  
This is a really good poem, and what needs to be done.
If you just repeated history, it wouldn't work out, would it?  
Hugs  
Ethel

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bslicker
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5 posted 2003-07-31 01:58 PM


passing shadows,
thank you very much, i know i don't write as much as i used to but i'll work on it.

EA
I think it will, just can't repeat the past.

LeeJ
thank you for reading

and
Ethel
you are so right, should have done this years ago....
So the answer to your question
no it wouldn't work out.
Thank you


Bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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6 posted 2003-07-31 02:10 PM


Awesome write here! I enjoyed this a lot! Sincerely, Sauni

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S

bslicker
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7 posted 2003-07-31 02:13 PM


Saunni  thank you
bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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