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Spiros Zafiris
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since 2002-10-20
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0 posted 2003-07-31 12:06 PM


irregular sublimity applauds your steps,
as do wounded whippoorwills bent on revenge,
if you encounter disservice
and draw a curtain round the bluebirds
in your heart

equivocally alone,
you may deem yourself worthy
of some laxity of reverence
trees raise their arms to send away birds
each time you entertain such avarice
only a grateful gaze turn calm
will fully awaken the Eden in your heart

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..circa 2003..Copyright 2003 Spiros Zafiris
..poem archived in several other sites
..channeled; from spirit, Ram; through Spiros

[This message has been edited by Spiros Zafiris (07-31-2003 12:42 PM).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2003-07-31 12:20 PM



Spiros, welcome home,
and thank you for the calming read...

Spiros Zafiris
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2 posted 2003-07-31 12:40 PM


..Sunshine../\..thanks; i'm always pleased to have a comment from you; always so encouraging....appears i made a small retyping error in last line..should read:
'fully awaken'..

../\..Spiros

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