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Sudhir Iyer
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0 posted 2003-07-31 11:22 AM


won’t you like to breathe
in scents of ancient woods
where young shrubs share space
with strong tall oaks of old
while droplets shine bright
on lanes of petals green
won’t you like to live
in such an immense dream

I know for sure that I
like to live in dreams
for romantic I am
with no need of guise
and nature holds for me
dreams that outlive dreams
a zeal that outlasts zeal
life that’s beyond life

won’t you like to swim
in rivers with gentle waves
where foams marry selves
to wayside cracks of rocks
while light feathers float
at ease with wind and sky
won’t you like to live
in such a boundless dream

I know for sure that I
love to live in dreams
and nature holds for me
streams of endless dreams


© Copyright 2003 Sudhir Iyer - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2003-07-31 11:33 AM


For romantic, you surely are.  This is lovely.  Let's get to that duet, any time you are ready...
Sunnyone
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2 posted 2003-07-31 12:13 PM


Ah, Sudhir, you truly are a romantic, and this is such a bewitching invitation to dream....loved it!  ~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

littlewing
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3 posted 2003-07-31 03:21 PM


Sudhir, as always bringing me peace with your words . . .
This reminds me of Rivendell
Beautiful execution
xxoo

Ceinwyn
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4 posted 2003-07-31 03:28 PM


being romantic is good *sigh*

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

magic_612
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5 posted 2003-07-31 03:29 PM


This poem is amazing.. very romantic and it made me feel as if I was dreaming
Earth Angel
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6 posted 2003-07-31 03:44 PM


Yes! Yes! YES!!!

Loved this!
Dream on!
Write on!


Linda

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2003-07-31 05:04 PM


Nice writing Sudhir...Jsmes
Bill Charles
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8 posted 2003-07-31 08:47 PM


Sudhir Iyer - your words touch me once again. To dream is just delightful and fulfilling...

BC

MARK V SHELDON
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9 posted 2003-07-31 08:54 PM


Ah yes:  location, location, location...  How much for time-share there?  I'm in...

-MVS  

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http://educate-yourself.org/

Dark Angel
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10 posted 2003-07-31 09:16 PM


and this is a beautiful dream, O Romantic One

Maree

fate is not just
whose cooking  smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)


Sudhir Iyer
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11 posted 2003-08-01 07:05 AM


Thanks a lot, my dear friends... dream on...

regards
sudhir

El_Campeador
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12 posted 2003-08-01 11:25 AM


I would certainly like to live in a boundless dream like this. Great poem, Sudhir.



“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

[This message has been edited by El_Campeador (08-01-2003 11:25 AM).]

vandana
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13 posted 2003-08-01 05:33 PM


enjoyed
Sudhir Iyer
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14 posted 2003-08-04 10:43 AM


Thanks, my dear friends...

regards
sudhir

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