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Open Poetry #27

Balancing Act

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-07-31 09:19 AM

Balancing Act

it is all
so fragile
to walk across
the sheet
of glass
and not find
the breaking point

"I am living a life, i have no wish to live. How did this happen?" Unknown

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

1 posted 2003-07-31 09:28 AM

WOW !!

S Arthur Grey
Senior Member

since 2001-03-19

Posts 719
woven by a poet's loom

2 posted 2003-07-31 09:29 AM

You find angles like "prismed" light!

*ooo*

s.a.g.

Amature2
Member

since 2001-01-08

Posts 416

3 posted 2003-07-31 08:55 PM

1slick_lady, walk softly, the edge will come. Nice write.

S Arthur Grey
Senior Member

since 2001-03-19

Posts 719
woven by a poet's loom

4 posted 2003-07-31 11:10 PM

Or like fresh ice on the lake . . .

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

5 posted 2003-07-31 11:34 PM

Damn girl, this is powerful. Keep writing and I'll continue to be a fan and find pieces of myself in your words.

Melissa~

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

6 posted 2003-07-31 11:45 PM

Amazing...everytime I read you. WOW!

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

7 posted 2003-07-31 11:58 PM

Your writing never ceases to amze me.Always full of such power and emotion, wether short or long.
angelblueyes

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