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Open Poetry #27
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Ramon
Junior Member
since 2003-07-22
Posts 28


0 posted 2003-07-31 08:59 AM


Car ma!
Car ma!
Car ma!

I heard
you the
first time

said the
mother to
the child

learning
and to
recognise

its words
for its
worldly goods

you know
if you were
a grown up

people would
think you were
warning them

about their past
present and
their future lives

just as well
you are no
naked holy man

said the mother
to her little
lover of words

© Copyright 2003 Ramon - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2003-07-31 09:01 AM


Incredible, very much enjoyed!
littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
2 posted 2003-07-31 10:46 AM


Ramon!
I adore this . . .
xxoo

Kahlil
Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881

3 posted 2003-07-31 09:12 PM


wow!  this is great!  it really made me think...
Poe_Pot_Pie
Member
since 2003-06-01
Posts 107
Canada
4 posted 2003-07-31 09:18 PM


Ma, I want a car!

Very nice piece. I enjoyed it greatly!

Ramon
Junior Member
since 2003-07-22
Posts 28

5 posted 2003-08-14 06:55 AM


thanks
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