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0 posted 2003-07-30 08:50 PM


A hot, burning, desire
for only the physical.
I neither wanted nor needed
the emotional connection;
and you know that
from the smouldering look
that I bestowed upon you.

**I hope this one is appropriate, if not many apologies**

© Copyright 2003 Rhonda Adolph - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-07-30 08:59 PM


I think you have hit on the real meaning of the word 'lust',
and quite appropriately worded your response to the challenge.
Well done!
~Hugs~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

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2 posted 2003-07-31 01:14 AM


ROFL.... I can't believe you kept it so clean.... LOL I'm not sure if I should be proud, or worried.... are you feeling alright?

Kielo

I'll never know the cost, but all of Him is more than enough for all of me....

littlewing
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3 posted 2003-07-31 01:27 AM


Rhonda!!!!
you doubled the challenge with this one
for sure!

It is excellent and clean enough for Open
*nodding head and bowiing to you*
and I thought this would be a tough one
you did beautifully
thank you
xxoo

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4 posted 2003-07-31 01:33 AM


I have been there many times...but I'm getting older now, so it's rare these days

thanks for the memories

littlewing
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5 posted 2003-07-31 10:32 AM


this needs to breathe . . .
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with you
6 posted 2003-07-31 10:35 AM


"for only the physical.
I neither wanted nor needed
the emotional connection;"

excellent

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