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gemjop
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0 posted 2003-07-30 04:30 PM



Something in the way
he looks like you

sailed my walk
faster from where he lay

I could drown
the worlds mass of earth

to stop breathing in silken hair
from this pillow

much the same
the effect evermore harsh upon my breath

he applies jaw to his word
soft boyish curve

pale skin pining in sleep
when his eyes wake

Is that when I will see?

Instant karma's gonna get you.

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Kaoru
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1 posted 2003-07-30 05:03 PM


"I could drown
the worlds mass of earth

to stop breathing in silken hair
from this pillow"

To remember,
to forget..
But always in between.

Beautiful.

Aenimal
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2 posted 2003-07-30 09:12 PM


Always reminders...argh
Enchantress
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3 posted 2003-07-30 09:19 PM


Wonderful write gem.
*btw...love your sig line*

~Hugs pretty lady~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

Wind
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4 posted 2003-07-30 09:24 PM


breathless write Gemma

insanity is not a crime

jwesley
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5 posted 2003-07-30 09:31 PM


Wonderful. Thought provoking.


jwesley

passing shadows
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6 posted 2003-07-31 02:34 AM


nice gemma, I ask the same question
garysgirl
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7 posted 2003-07-31 02:42 AM


Something in the way
he looks like you

sailed my walk
faster from where he lay


Uh-oh, Gemma. That sounds like you are being reminded
a lot of  him. Not good, is it?
Hugs and love to you, my sweet little friend  
Ethel Mae

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