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Aenimal
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0 posted 2003-07-30 12:05 PM


Le Sang Rael eludes
us still,  countless deaths upon
the Siege Perilous

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (07-30-2003 12:06 PM).]

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littlewing
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1 posted 2003-07-30 12:27 PM


and challenge met beautifully . . .
the ultimate answer, will always elude
this is excellent Raph, truly
xxoo

[This message has been edited by littlewing (07-30-2003 01:24 PM).]

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2 posted 2003-07-30 12:58 PM


Excellent!
Challenge skillfully met!
~Hugs~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

Aenimal
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3 posted 2003-07-30 01:15 PM


thanks sue its the answer that eludes

Thanks Nancy

Ceinwyn
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4 posted 2003-07-30 01:19 PM


KING ARTHUR!!! urgh sorry moment here..*slowly walks towards the door* I might have missed the point of this poem but haha you'll tell me later right? cos I'm sucha dork

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

littlewing
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5 posted 2003-07-30 01:24 PM


you know what I meant LOL
I'll go change that thanks

gemjop
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6 posted 2003-07-30 02:51 PM


Yeah, dork number 2, I'm with Kris..I have no idea, i'm just a clueless british berk.

sounded good though when i read it out loud to see if it made sense to my brain.

It didn't    

he heeeee xx


Aenimal
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7 posted 2003-07-30 09:14 PM


Yeah that round table, the Siege Perilous was a chair set at that table for the one who found the Holy Grail, anyone else whou sat in it would perish
Dark Angel
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8 posted 2003-07-31 07:08 AM


WOW!
Imma gonna keepa disa one.

Sir Raph

Maree

fate is not just
whose cooking  smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)


serenity blaze
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9 posted 2003-07-31 07:12 AM


Take a knee, m'friend--if you will trust me with this sword, it's about time you were knighted.



Wonderful answer to the challenge, and round tables, doncha just love em. I once went out with a guy who had a round table that rotated, as a coffee table in his livingroom. Came in handy for stealing beers.



(just another serenity footnote..grin)

Ceinwyn
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10 posted 2003-07-31 11:59 AM


duh raphey I know what the seige perilious is.... and I can't spell lmao

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

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11 posted 2003-07-31 12:02 PM


yeh..sounded nice. I need translation? yes..clearly the historical..whatever, I can't even to pretend to know what you are talking about...you are so far away from me sometimes

insanity is not a crime

Brad Majors
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12 posted 2003-07-31 12:14 PM


awesome
Aenimal
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13 posted 2003-07-31 04:32 PM


Maree tankulo very much i'm a sorata I no see dis a before

lol K, mmmmm beer but trust you with a sword? I don't think I trust myself with one..here's a spoon..arise sir loin of beef

Kris u spoken gooder englishes

Thanks liz I think..um yeah there was a compliemtn in there perhaps but who could tell

thanks Brad

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